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anonymous
 5 years ago
nobodies on the english forum, can i get a little advice? (no technical, just what would look better)
anonymous
 5 years ago
nobodies on the english forum, can i get a little advice? (no technical, just what would look better)

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amistre64
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0go with the bowtie :)

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i am writing a big research paper that compares indian mathematic education to english mathematic education. i dont expect anyone to know about it, but how would you start off and carry through?

amistre64
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I am writing my this reasearch paper to compare......

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i meant generally, start with a breif history on how the educations relate or start with the comparing or what

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Discuss why your research is important and maybe briefly touch on the differences and similarities.

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0iiiiii have no idea why its important...

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0You want to start off with something that will grab the readers attention. Research papers can be very boring to read for many people, so I would try with a fact that is shocking or stands out.

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0What about all the transfer students that come from India to the United States to universities that are primarily dedicated to teaching those educated in American public schools?

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0You have to develop context in an expository essay, like this, so you will have to talk about the history. If it's a comparison, you have to set the context.

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I'd say thats somewhat important

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Your introduction should contain all the points you are going to consider/talk about in your essay.

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0alright im screwed .

amistre64
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0start with a joke; whyd the duck cross the road? ....... to beat the chickens retrice:)

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Arman1002, Like I said discuss why your paper is important. Tens of thousands of students go overseas every year to Engineering & Science schools at universities that usually try to teach to the way American students were taught.

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0If it's an expository essay, and one where you're comparing two things, you have to know about the similarities and differences. Your point here lies with explaining the differences and similarities of the two systems.

amistre64
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0yeah, my kids didnt laugh either; but I did lol

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0arman, are you panicking again?

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0is any of this helping?

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0im running through my info now

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0What's the essay question?

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0theres no question write about whatever, but i have already submitted my subject and cant change it

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Start it off by saying something like: People from India are notorious for their aptitude with mathematics, science, and engineering. The question is whether this generality is simply related to a faulty perception by society or associated with stark differences in the countries educational system...then you could talk about some of the similities and difference with learning in india and learning in the United States....maybe, i donno ha

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0they arent haha, the literacy and education in india sucks so much that their IQ is nearly just above the standard of retardation

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0im a freshman, so im trying to figure out how to keep their standards as well as write the essay to convey all this... problem is is that i have the imagination and information to say a lot but the grammar and contingency lacks so i just sound stupid

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0their being the schools

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Well, it sounds more like you need an editor over stimulus.

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i need some kind of salvation i got 5 hours to write at least 4 pages... you bet im panicking!

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Take your point, try to distill a few themes, then use those themes to guide your essay. You're not actually arguing a point, your exposing something (hence, expository).

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0omg that makes sense!

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0When it comes to education, the most important points to influence outcomes are: 1) Socioeconomic status 2) The quality of the educator (their knowledge AND ability to engage/communicate/implement curriculum in a meaningful way (which needs resources)) 3) The attitude and ability of the student.

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0The first one tends to always stand out significantly in research.

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Maybe you can link what you have to those three themes?

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0the essay is specifically about mathematic education and i just found my thesis...

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0So this papers on is just comparing Indian education to American education to American dedication right?

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0SHUTUP quentin. youre sitting right next to me. .

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0what's your thesis then?

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0stupid... thats what it is . "As south asians migrated from south asia, their execution of culture transforme into education as they inheritedand remade their traditions, when compared to the western historicbased fundamentals in education"

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0minus all the spelling and grmamar

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0American education not dedication my bad haha

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0what are you trying to say (in plain English first)?

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0oh my bad, theres a random sentence in there .

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Are you basically saying it's culture that shapes what and how people learn?

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0If you're saying that, you're dead on.

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0And Arman has left the room...

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0it actually says (and as i reword it aswell): "as south Asians migrated from south Asia to America, their execution of culture transformed into education, as opposed to how western education which is founded on revolutionary ideals

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I think you're overcomplicating the language.

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0it actually says (and as i reword it aswell): "as south Asians migrated from south Asia to America, their execution of culture transformed into education, as opposed to how western education which is founded on revolutionary ideals

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0my computer is just being slow at times

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I would be more inclined to open with something along the lines of how research shows education is shaped by culture and then look at a few aspects of difference between the mathematics education of both societies as a function of culture.

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Then use your points as a framework to write the rest.

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Then summarize your points in your conclusion.

anonymous
 5 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0arman 1002 lm an university sutdent in turkey.l need your suggestions about work and travel to improve my English
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