can someone proof read my essay?
I know that no one is perfect. But it’s good to have expectations. The qualities that are important to me in a partner are honesty, respect, and responsibility. Without these three qualities I don’t think the relationship would work out. If I can’t trust someone then I know for a fact they won’t respect me.
The first quality I look for in a partner is honesty. If he lies about small things then he’s definitely going to lie about big things. I hate lies, regardless of the reason they are told. I rather hear the truth even if it’s going to hurt me because in
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is this the entire essay? why don't you attach it as a file
"It is commonly understood nobody is perfect, but most people expect their partners to be honest, respectful, and responsible when it involves the dynamics within a relationship. If partners are not able to develop trust between themselves due to dishonesty on either side, then they will lack respect for each other as well..."
By doing some freewriting followed by several revisions, you should be able to tease out an excellent thesis from the ideas you presented. Just remain focused on the thesis and expand on it in the body of your essay.
yeap you should work more on your sentence construction any way youre good
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attach a file of your entire essay. but, i'll say this: like krawles showed, some editing will leave first person out of this. if it's a academic essay that hasn't been specified to be first person, using "i" and "me" might reflect badly.