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Ok so its kinda a angry poem. i was sick and tired of being told who to be and how to act.... ^^ Tell me what you think!!!! (: Fierce. Cant push ME down. Cant make ME frown. Been a rebel all my life. Baby im full of strife. Cant make me go lame. I'll never be tame. I am who i am, thats just it. So if you dont like it, quit the pellet. I never hold back, not ever. I hide it well, but im real clever. When you feel your vision goin hazy. Babe thats me, makin you crazy. I may be ditzy but im not a fool. And to hell with acting cool. You could say im high fashion. My whole world is passion. ....

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    like your attitude decide for what you believe in

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    thx (: what do u think nomothetis?

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    oh and i always listen to music when i write my poetry its like.... my ispiration?.... (:

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    That reads more like rap than anything. Not bad, but make sure that's the genre you're aiming for. A few comments: Spelling matters, as does grammar. "Babe thats me" should be "Babe that's me" unless you have specific artistic reasons why you don't want that to happen. You write like that in several places, so make sure you are doing it on purpose. And if you're doing it on purpose, make sure you know your audience—not everyone will find this appealing. In general, try to emulate the poets you're a fan of. You will never write great poetry on your own: you have to observe what other people write, and take their best ideas. Stand on the shoulders of giants. If you're basing your poetry on songs, then consider being a songwriter/lyricist instead, as your knowledge will be more transferrable, and they are not exactly the same thing. Hope this helps. Good luck and keep at it!

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    thanks it does!! and ok! (:

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