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nice you experiencing true love!!! there
haha it wasnt about anyone :P
i just wrote what i want in love lol :P
but have you met this guy yet???
cuz its gonna be a thrilling experience
nope lol havent met this guy yet lol and i hope so!!! ^ ^
yeah me tooo ....so have you ever had plans for Africa???
i need help to write an essay
the easy form is mus include : -name of a drug -history of drug -street name -short +long term effect -how is it ingested -what effects does it have on body -anyother intersting facts
The rhyme scheme is too predictable and the syllables are stretched. You avoided a major cliche in the end which is good. This could use more structure and more details, however.
ik :P but u have to take into context that i didnt write this off any 1 person i wrote a fantasy of what i want in a relationship!! ^ ^
Why? What does that have to do with the delivery of the poem? A lot of early poetry that is written, evades a heuristic approach or empiricism. One may muse over the stars without the sounds of a violent nebula, nor the heat of them. Most poetry IS fantasy. Regardless of the experience, the delivery and the basis of engaging the senses becomes the deciding factor of good poetry vs. bad.
yes. correct so what would u say about my poem then? What is good about it and what needs to be worked on per say.
oh wait nvm same person!! ^ ^