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Dawn_of_Love

  • 3 years ago

Hope you like it! Comment!! His kiss so sweet his touch is hard to beat i love him with all my heart he tells me im beautiful and smart when he looks at me and only me i know thers nowhere else i'd rather be in his arms i feel safe in him i have faith I love him so much i live to feel his touch he never lies ill never forget those eyes Staring into my soul making me feel whole i love how he is strong with him nothing is wrong. Even if its just a hug his love is my drug.

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  1. 3lroy
    • 3 years ago
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    nice you experiencing true love!!! there

  2. Dawn_of_Love
    • 3 years ago
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    haha it wasnt about anyone :P

  3. Dawn_of_Love
    • 3 years ago
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    i just wrote what i want in love lol :P

  4. 3lroy
    • 3 years ago
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    but have you met this guy yet???

  5. 3lroy
    • 3 years ago
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    cuz its gonna be a thrilling experience

  6. Dawn_of_Love
    • 3 years ago
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    nope lol havent met this guy yet lol and i hope so!!! ^ ^

  7. 3lroy
    • 3 years ago
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    yeah me tooo ....so have you ever had plans for Africa???

  8. sarahrose
    • 3 years ago
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    your good!

  9. mary1000
    • 3 years ago
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    i need help to write an essay

  10. 3lroy
    • 3 years ago
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    just start and send me a copy ill help polish it for you!!!!!!here my email.....elroy.20@live.com

  11. mary1000
    • 3 years ago
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    the easy form is mus include : -name of a drug -history of drug -street name -short +long term effect -how is it ingested -what effects does it have on body -anyother intersting facts

  12. Derocrates
    • 3 years ago
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    The rhyme scheme is too predictable and the syllables are stretched. You avoided a major cliche in the end which is good. This could use more structure and more details, however.

  13. Dawn_of_Love
    • 3 years ago
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    ik :P but u have to take into context that i didnt write this off any 1 person i wrote a fantasy of what i want in a relationship!! ^ ^

  14. Derocrates
    • 3 years ago
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    Why? What does that have to do with the delivery of the poem? A lot of early poetry that is written, evades a heuristic approach or empiricism. One may muse over the stars without the sounds of a violent nebula, nor the heat of them. Most poetry IS fantasy. Regardless of the experience, the delivery and the basis of engaging the senses becomes the deciding factor of good poetry vs. bad.

  15. Dawn_of_Love
    • 3 years ago
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    yes. correct so what would u say about my poem then? What is good about it and what needs to be worked on per say.

  16. Dawn_of_Love
    • 3 years ago
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    oh wait nvm same person!! ^ ^

  17. 3lroy
    • 3 years ago
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    @democrates it aint as as you think i believe the main purpose of a poem is to express your feelings and your thinking not just following some steps making it kinda classic

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