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anilorap

  • 3 years ago

someone thats can help me with english please,,, there is nobody in that room

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  1. virtus
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    whats the question

  2. anilorap
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    well im doing a research paper,,, my english is not that very good.... and i would like someone to check my gramma and ideas... to see if i can keep going.. because is almos 1 am and i need to finish but im fustrated thinking about if what i am writing is totaling wrong

  3. virtus
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    ok sure no problems just send it across to me attach the file

  4. anilorap
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    ok its no fisnish yet,,, but please do not hesitate on give any advise

  5. virtus
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    it fine just send what you've got

  6. anilorap
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  7. anilorap
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    :) thanks

  8. virtus
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    my apologies is it ok if you convert it to 2003 format because i have microsoft word 2003

  9. anilorap
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    ok

  10. anilorap
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  11. virtus
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    one sec

  12. virtus
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    umm do you mind if i edit it a bit

  13. anilorap
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    can u do it in color i want to learn.. please

  14. virtus
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    sure

  15. anilorap
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    thanks

  16. virtus
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    Over the years I have seen that life is all about overcoming obstacles and building new perceptions of how the future could be. However, many people live inside a bubble where they only can see the present, and after a long time of struggling for living they start to ask themselves about the future. Where is the future? How can I believe in myself and then show to others who I really am? The two key words inside these two questions are “future” and “belief”. If we are able to find what they mean in our lives then we can create who we really are. I believe personality is shaped thru one’s life experiences and also through learning from the experiences of others. Thus the future is about becoming who you really are or what you perceive yourself to be. In the case of Julia Alvarez, a Dominican-American writer, who explains in all her works how she was able to shape her identity within herself and for others; being cross cultural impacted on three key aspects of her life. She explains how the transition from a traditional surrounding where one is familiar and comfortable in, to a completely different and unknown place where everything from the culture to the values are different; may influence one’s thoughts and feelings.

  17. virtus
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    this is the first paragraph

  18. virtus
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    i'm working on the second and third now

  19. virtus
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    sorry the colour didn't turn up when i copy and pasted it i'll send it to you via word afterwards then you shoud be able to see it

  20. anilorap
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    noo i can see itttt

  21. anilorap
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    omgg

  22. anilorap
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    i like it

  23. anilorap
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    espera the third... i finishid,, the one u have is not finish

  24. virtus
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    I personally am able to relate to Julia Alvarez’s negative experience with not knowing a language and falling below her classmates, as I too experienced similar circumstances. Its not easy being forced to assimilate into a different environment where you feel vulnerable as you are unable to defend yourself from others. Alvarez explains in one of her essays, La Gringuita: On Loosing a Native Language, that: “those were the days before bilingual education or multicultural studies, when kids like us were thrown in the deep end of the public school pool and left to fend for ourselves. Not everyone came up for air.”(62). This had undoubtedly been a dark stage in her life where she had felt frustrated and depressed. However Alvarez, managed to stay strong and face these obstacles presented to her with courage and determination. She wanted to show her classmates that she was not weak or inferior as they had believed her to be. She wanted to show them she was strong, and it was this source of strength and perseverance that allowed her to realise who she really was.

  25. anilorap
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    Are u tired. or can i send u my third paragraph

  26. anilorap
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    i am reading this one

  27. anilorap
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    you are really good... and i am so horrible,,, iam going to cry

  28. virtus
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    anilorap you are good its just you need some practice. with some more practice you can be really good

  29. virtus
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    send it to me i'll do it

  30. anilorap
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    :)

  31. anilorap
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    ok my third

  32. anilorap
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    The new world was not only affecting her feelings but affecting her thoughts and the way she defined her personality toward others. Who to become in life? Coming to United States Alvarez was placed between different cultures, values, systems and languages which most of the time affected the way she was thinking, her future plans and the seeking of the person she wanted to be. Alvarez expressed in her essay Family Matters that: “Part of the family and also my own person, that full an impossible combination, isn’t that what we all want is to put it all together and become that bigger version of ourselves and still be loved by those who have only partially love us.”(129) in this essay the seeking of her own identity, her feeling and thoughts gather together in order to shape the person who she is. She described how hard was to see that all the family she loved did not supported on her future plans and she wanted to find the way where she could become who she wanted to be and also become who the loved ones wanted her to be, it was hard. I related this to my personal thoughts and the way sometimes I want to overcome this obstacle that limited me from explore the world and destroy the language barriers and just become what I always wanted to become. Besides, not having the support of my family in this new world is one of the harder problems; however, the way of how my feelings and though meet at a certain point of the day sometimes is extremely frustrated, having thoughts and unknown how to translate them to English and most of all how to write them, interfere with my daily life learning and that, really frustrated me.

  33. anilorap
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    Ohh i just read it.. omg.. not good...

  34. virtus
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    Part of the family and also my own person, that full an impossible combination, isn’t that what we all want is to put it all together and become that bigger version of ourselves and still be loved by those who have only partially love us.”

  35. virtus
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    did you change anything for this part it sounds odd or are they the exact words from Alvarez

  36. anilorap
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    jii her words

  37. anilorap
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    no no

  38. anilorap
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    i felt i miss something too i have to re check

  39. anilorap
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    but i dont have the book with me now, so ill check it tomorrow before print it

  40. virtus
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    The new environment was not only affecting her feelings but also affecting her thoughts and shaped her personality. Coming to United States, Alvarez was placed within a whole new culture,system and language which heavily influenced her future plans and caused her to question who she wanted to become in life. Alvarez expressed in her essay Family Matters that: “Part of the family and also my own person, that full an impossible combination, isn’t that what we all want is to put it all together and become that bigger version of ourselves and still be loved by those who have only partially love us.”(129) Alvarez’s personal pursuit of her own identity greatly shaped the person she has now become. Her pain and hardships are echoed through her words as she describes her struggle to live up to the expectations of her loved ones and yet at the same time fulfill her own inner wants. Alvarez’s struggle reminded me of my own personal battle. At times I want to just destroy all those obstacles, barriers and the lack of family support I have that have blockaded me from exploring the world and becoming what I have always aspired to become. These obstacles are just like chains restricting me from walking and running. The language barrier is like a personal handicap where speaking and writing are difficult. It really frustrates how all these things disrupt my life and hold me down from becoming who I want to become

  41. virtus
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    that is it, do not hesitate to change anything because this is just a suggestion feel free to ask me if you don't understand anything

  42. anilorap
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    ok

  43. anilorap
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    let me see

  44. anilorap
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    i like it... :) there are few words that are little high class for me

  45. virtus
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    oh sorry

  46. virtus
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    i just detected a slight error "It really frustrates how all these things disrupt my life and hold me down from becoming who I want to become " there should be a ME "It really frustrates ME how all these things disrupt my life and hold me down from becoming who I want to become "

  47. anilorap
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    yea i was reading that...

  48. virtus
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    alright i needa go now hope this helps =]

  49. anilorap
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    thanksss yea thak u very very much

  50. virtus
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    always welcome

  51. anilorap
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    can u give an advise... before leaving please

  52. anilorap
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    ??? :)

  53. virtus
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    sure. overall it was a good piece of writing but you need to work on your grammar and expression. some of your sentences sound on. so just keep reading and practicing your expression. well done anilorap

  54. virtus
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    just out of curiousity is that a true story

  55. anilorap
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    thanks virtus

  56. anilorap
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    yeaaaaa

  57. virtus
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    omgoodness that was very touching

  58. anilorap
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    is my history compare with this writer

  59. anilorap
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    this is my final paper :(

  60. virtus
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    i admire your strength in learning to face living under different circumstances

  61. anilorap
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    thanks.. sometimes i do,, and sometimes i feel falling down,,, but i try :)

  62. virtus
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    your strong, i know you are. we all will fall down sometimes but its the ability to stand up and rise again that counts stay strong and all the best with your essay. get some sleep!bye!

  63. anilorap
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    bye

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