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You did what your mom never did You took control Cuz your no longer a kid They cant hurt you You rose up and began to soar You loved me with everything you had From the begining you swore That we'd get what you werent given Someone to understand and care Someone to tell you all was forgiven Your heart is bigger than you know You will give everything you have and expect nothing in return To this day it continues to grow! Mommy im so thankful and glad i have you here You rose me right and i take for granted how much you endear You will always be the person you are the good the bad and the painful but you carry around ur past like a proud scar Your not afraid to be you you dont wanna be anyone else Your not scared of what you've been through I want to be that brave I want to not be afraid I want to be able to save from the dark and the frightening To run away and give your fears a mere wave Dont ever put youself down Mom you are one of the most beautiful honest good hearted people out there Because its obvious your one of the best kind of people around Without a doubt im glad your my mother We may have our quarells But there can never be another mom for me out there
What do u guys think? :) i wrote it for my mom for mothers day pls comment your opinion!! :)
your= you're or you are
where does it say that?
rose= raise or raised
ahhhhhh i see it alright thx anythig else tht can be changed? :)
still looking :)
wow that is amazing
it is? xD i thought i could of done better!! u like it? YAY!!!!
yep. i really like it
xD!! yay!!! :)
i wish i had the same talent like you do
It's excellent. What do you mean by "To run away and give your fears a mere wave?"
im sure you could write something so beautiful it hurts to read it lol all u gotta have is passion. without it you cant rite a good poem!! i always play music that gives me the emotion i want to write a poem about!! u should try! :)
ok i will
I meant that she left her mom and dad to come live in wasington bc she was always scared as a kid her...step-dad was abusive :(
aww this is BEAUTIFUL wish i could say the same thing about my mom
How about you write about something that has helped her face her fears or what she has done to overcome them.
What do u think that was?!? u have to dig deeper.. its usually like that with finding the meaning/story behind poems :) u would seriously have to know her all your life to understand it but hearing its great from people who dont even know my mom is... amazing that i could've wrote this :) and makes me feel good!! :D
Remember no matter how a cruel a mom might, at the end she will be the only one you go to and cry in her lap.
i agree with you
You guys are lucky to have mom. Don't let anything ruin the bond :) Next thing you know they might be gone and you'll never see them again.
ik she will always be that for me nomatter what. i love her with all my heart and i wouldnt trade her for the world :) she has been through so much and she raised me and my sister all on her own. when she first realized she was pregnant with me she decided to stop smoking to go to college and to quit drinking. it makes me feel good she did it all for me =3
the same thing happen with my best friend
rly? lol she got pregnant at 21 and i was the accident child ^_^ but i wouldnt have it any other way :)
i love this poem
awww thx olivia :)