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  • 5 years ago

tell me if this poem is any good!!! (I got really bored and its useless..lol) I cannot write a Poem that is worth the time Even though this rhymes

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  1. Owlfred
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    Love it! Keep writing :)

  2. anonymous
    • 5 years ago
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    Haha!! I think you could have made a much better poem Olivia! :) I mean if you can write stories you can write poems!! :D

  3. anonymous
    • 5 years ago
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    lol i kno! Im doing a poetry project in english and am sooo lost

  4. anonymous
    • 5 years ago
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    Well i can ALWAYS help!! u kno im a poet!! :) hit me with ur assignment :) :D

  5. anonymous
    • 5 years ago
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    okay well we have to write seven poems. Four of them have to be a different orginazational pattern...I have one, its really short, and its an organazational pattern called a triangular triplet

  6. anonymous
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    Alright I dont think i remember those organizational patterns by name so what all do you have to have... :)

  7. anonymous
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    mkay.. these are the patterns free verse narrative poetry haiku acrostic diamnte cinquain couplets triangular triplet five W's verd "ING" phrases Lyrics Alliteration

  8. anonymous
    • 5 years ago
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    Alright i have heard of basically all of them and in a tst i had to memorize them so im pretty familiar with em but i just didnt recongnize the triangular triplet one. So which patterns are you thinking of doing?

  9. anonymous
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    haikus, triangular triplets, lyrics, and maybe some other ones

  10. anonymous
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    Alright so then arent haikus like a poem of 3 line with 5 syllables on the first line 7 syllables on the second and 5 on the 3rd?

  11. anonymous
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    yeppers

  12. anonymous
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    hmm for a haiku u could do this: When your feeling down = 5 syllables and on ur face is a frown = 7 syllables just never give up = 5 syllables

  13. anonymous
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    good? :D lol not my bestest.i dont rly like haikus :P

  14. anonymous
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    i love that!!!!!!! can i use it for one of my collected poems???

  15. anonymous
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    course!!!! :) lol

  16. anonymous
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    i have a book of collected poems too ^^

  17. anonymous
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    okay now the last one was lyrics right? what is your schools deinition of lyrics.. ^^ might be different than my schools since im in high school ^_^ lol :)

  18. anonymous
    • 5 years ago
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    kool...nd idk...i guess like a song. I write songs, idk if they'd count tho

  19. anonymous
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    Okay so that DEFINITELY counts!! :) hmm i have only ever written one song ^_^ lol hit me with ur song lyrics!! :)

  20. anonymous
    • 5 years ago
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    lol. i don't have like my good ones here with me. but heres one. I've been walking on broken glass Staring through the cracks Everything's been torn away Everything's astray I got a broken heart I got a mixed up mind Been trying to get back to start But i'm only loosing time...

  21. anonymous
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    thats all i have rite now

  22. anonymous
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    :D i RLY like that so far!! :) u should put that in ur assignment for school!! :)

  23. anonymous
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    lol I WILL!!:)

  24. anonymous
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    okie dokie i think thats al of ur requirements rite? :) lol well there ya gooo!!! :D haha i feel like a teacher... ^_^

  25. anonymous
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    lol u'd make a good one! :)

  26. anonymous
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    :D!! a good english teacher maybe lol but definitely not a good math teacher blaghh i hate math :P lol

  27. anonymous
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    lol me too..in my school, i'm in seventh grade math (im in sixth grade) and its nooooooot fun

  28. anonymous
    • 5 years ago
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    lol! my little sister is in sixth grade!! xD we live in WA state! ^^ lol and ya lol that means ur taking pre algebra rite? thats weird cuz thats the only math i got A's all yr in ^^ :)

  29. anonymous
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    haha i guess its pre algebra..all i know that its a bunch of blah blah blah...lol

  30. anonymous
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    LOL!! ya i dont know how but i got good grades that year ^^

  31. anonymous
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    thats good! did you say you lived in WA state??

  32. anonymous
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    yeppers!! i live ther!! :) u?

  33. anonymous
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    the sunshine state!!! FLORIDA!!! lol

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