anonymous
  • anonymous
Here is a poem i wrote in the depths of despair and when i came out i hope u like it!! :)
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anonymous
  • anonymous
Im so lost you have always told me you'd be here but where are you now!!! My screams cant u hear!? I thought i loved you with everything i had I gave you my all oh and i forgot to add you took my heart from my grasp Between your fingers around my heart ur fingers clasped U tricked me said u'd never leave oh ya we'll be together forever... Look at me now, look how i grieve! Can u see the tears in my eyes? can u see me hide it can u see me hide my cries? Are you even looking to see if im ok? im hurt and u dont care my emotions are all astray but then you pick me up off the ground look at me with those eyes And i realize wow what the hell have i found! someone to love me for all i am treat me with care tho! Bc with one sentence BAM and i cant breathe anger and sadness cloud my vision and with madness i start to seethe You can send me spiraling down losing control real fast In my own tears watch me drown Remember to hold your head up high to always do whats right And dont be afraid to cry Never give in what the hell You decide whats a sin Be yourself and thats all pick yourself up whenever you fall always be strong they cant push u down Bc thats just wrong Lifes a gift not a given rite Dont give in to every rift pusj against the current make your own path Bc if it werent for you and you alone it wouldnt be this way They wouldnt have flown So live it the way u want be who u are And dont let them haunt This is your life live it with strife
anonymous
  • anonymous
Nobody cared nobody even tried And you were oh so scared more scared than you have ever been helpless against this mans sin With no-one to go to Noone to help you get through You did it all on ur own You kept me safe You were my mom and my stone You gave me the love you never had Gave me what you hadnt known You were my mom and my dad You gave me everything you could Yet still i wasnt ok You did all in your power to make my life good You came from the depths of despair You made a choice And you were always there You did what your mom never did You took control Cuz your no longer a kid They cant hurt you You rose up and began to soar You loved me with everything you had From the begining you swore That we'd get what you werent given Someone to understand and care Someone to tell you all was forgiven Your heart is bigger than you know You will give everything you have and expect nothing in return To this day it continues to grow! Mommy im so thankful and glad i have you here You rose me right and i take for granted how much you endear You will always be the person you are the good the bad and the painful but you carry around ur past like a proud scar Your not afraid to be you you dont wanna be anyone else Your not scared of what you've been through I want to be that brave I want to not be afraid I want to be able to save myself from the dark and the frightening To run away and give your fears a mere wave Dont ever put youself down Mom you are one of the most beautiful honest good hearted people out there Because its obvious your one of the best kind of people around Without a doubt im glad your my mother We may have our quarells But there can never be another mom for me out there
anonymous
  • anonymous
^ poem for mom for mothers day :)

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anonymous
  • anonymous
amazing...i nevr write nethng fr my mum or on the mother...bt its one of d most imp bonds in the world
anonymous
  • anonymous
Poem i wrote for someone special ^_^ Why cant you see? Theres nothing else you should be! Its so strange for someone to genuinely care! To give me there love to share! Around you I tend to squeal I cant believe this is actually for real! You are anything but snooty And in me u see beauty! You don’t mind that im strange And you never ever want me to change You think im too good for you When I know its not true I don’t know how I got so lucky to be with someone so…wow I know you’ll be there when I cry Because your just that great a guy. You never sleep! You’re the one I gotta keep Why must we be so far apart You, I would let into my heart. I will never ask for much Only to know your touch Kissing my lips Your hands running down my hips I’d walk many a mile just to see your smile You make me feel sooooo special I bet to feel your kiss Would be total blisssss You make me feel good inside and out And without a doubt in my mind You the best damn thing im ever gonna find :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
and yes it truly is :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
a poem i wrote about what i want in love :) His kiss so sweet his touch is hard to beat i love him with all my heart he tells me im beautiful and smart when he looks at me and only me i know thers nowhere else i'd rather be in his arms i feel safe in him i have faith I love him so much i live to feel his touch he never lies ill never forget those eyes Staring into my soul making me feel whole i love how he is strong with him nothing is wrong. Even if its just a hug his love is my drug. ^_^
anonymous
  • anonymous
thats really emotional..really romantic..beautiful..how i wish someone in d world would write this for me...some1 would love me lyk this
anonymous
  • anonymous
>.< i will write you a love poem to make u feel good if u want!! :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
Although it might be a little hard because passion is the root of all my poetry >.< LOL
anonymous
  • anonymous
AWWWWWWWW.SO SWEET F U..bt really if sm1 loved me lyk that..id die fr them..this is d love i want..merging with love for the divine...
anonymous
  • anonymous
:) I think you will DEFINITELY find someone!! I mean look at u u will put any women you care alot about on a high pedestal!!!!!!!!1 and women would be SOOOOOOOOOOOOOo lucky to have you!! I mean i would do anything to have a guy like ou!! ANY women would!!! :) Ur special i mean just look at the beautiful poetry you wrote!!! :) Its so stunning it makes me want to cry, smile, laugh, yell and moan all the same time!! You are ultimate, you are passionate and you are you :) Who could resist that?
anonymous
  • anonymous
m grinnig the widest smile of my life..thats all i cn say..
anonymous
  • anonymous
may god bless you..with faith illumination and love
anonymous
  • anonymous
:) And to you the same. You deserve better than what this women is giving you. If she cant see the glory that you are, why even try i am trying to tell you that you are too good to dwell on her!! Do you know how many women ik would kill for a man like you?!?!?!?! Why waste your time. You deserve someone who will love you for you. Completely and truly. Relationships are like Relationships are like glass its better to leave it broken rather than trying to hurt yourself putting it back together... :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
ill remember that...bt i dont wnna hurt her dolly..love hr 2 much..
anonymous
  • anonymous
*sigh* i know the feeling i have fallen head over heels for a guy halfway across the world :(
anonymous
  • anonymous
sounds like an interesting story...
anonymous
  • anonymous
>.< You dont have to listen to it if you dont want to :( Im fine. really.
anonymous
  • anonymous
nah i meant id love 2 know
anonymous
  • anonymous
:) *sigh* well i met him on here.. as corny as THT is... :P Well he kept talking about getting into my digital pants and he was making me laugh soooooooo much just by his typing!! ^_^ and then i got together with this other guy :( but i kept thinking about when i told him that he wasnt rude at all to me he acted soooo caring? idk and i finally decided that he was worth it even if i didnt know him barely at all ^_^ so i dumped the other guy and we talked for awhile and then he was like can u send me some pics pls? like bikini pics? its just so hard to imagine things and i was like ahwwwwwww :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
And then i sent him some and he was like telling me all this stuff that made me just GRIN like REAAAALLYYYYYY grin :) idk he told me he doesnt usually think girls are super hot very easily but he thought i was and i was just like i wanna kiss u sooooo bad!!!! >.< I am getting a webcam soon so i will be able to hear his voice but idk >.< our ultimate plan was to go to our own private island for 3 weeks completely alone ^_^ a little far fetched but its what i aim for!! :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
*sigh* ur like the first person i have told this to.... >.< I tell my parents and i will never talk to him again!!! :(
anonymous
  • anonymous
i think u shouldnt even trust him...hes settin u up obviously
anonymous
  • anonymous
Setting me up?...... >.< huh?
anonymous
  • anonymous
Setting me up fot what exactely ?
anonymous
  • anonymous
for having fun with you
anonymous
  • anonymous
I dont think i would mind tht at all..... ^_^ its a mutual feeling u kno... LOL
anonymous
  • anonymous
then wht cn i say...
anonymous
  • anonymous
Nothing!!! :) im just rly glad i get to tell somebody!! :) u rly are one of a kind u kno tht? :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
thnx
anonymous
  • anonymous
y dint u tell it to ne f ur frnds??
anonymous
  • anonymous
Ok heres my story i was watever the flutter people call "cool" the blonde the cheerleader whatever!! but then i got into some bad stuff and.... now im doing online school >.< and my friends havent talked to me in like a little while and i cant get ahold of them!!! :P
anonymous
  • anonymous
dont worry...ill tell u sumthing...just dont forget the light that burns inside u..b true to urselfl...have faith in god...nd be good to everyone...evrythin will turn out fine...
anonymous
  • anonymous
:) Yea ur rite thanks your a good person to talk to u know that? :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
haha..thnx..m just tryin 2 rediscover my own light..itll only come back if i teach people to look fr god...i created this new spiritual system inside me 6 yrs ago...nd its a struggle keeping it up and looking fr answers on the spiritual path..bt m trying
anonymous
  • anonymous
:) Ya but not everything in this world can be solved in spirituality :) just remember that . Always remember that.
anonymous
  • anonymous
but thats exactly my point...evrythng in this wrld can b solved through faith nd light and love..
anonymous
  • anonymous
Almost everything :) I mean you wont be able to ever accomplish anything if you dont do some of it urself!! not everything u can rely on believing in god. It can/wont solve all ur problems :( believe me :(
anonymous
  • anonymous
yeah bt i dint mention the othr part
anonymous
  • anonymous
its equally importnt to mix faith with actions...
anonymous
  • anonymous
infact illumination is the first step on the spiritual path to correct ur actions and enlighten ur soul
anonymous
  • anonymous
:) Yesh but you arent one of those people who want everyone to follow your religion right? :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
nah..its not a religion\ evry1 cn follow their own religion..its just the basic cor faith which is the same fr all
anonymous
  • anonymous
through this view we shed the excess baggage of our own faiths and rediscover god inside us, and everywhere
anonymous
  • anonymous
And what would basic cor faith? what if all christians are WRONG... what then? What about a goddess? Ever think of that? I believe anything if possible, i think once all the religions linked together and made the "one truth" meaning put together minus and add a few things and thats whats real. do you have a problem with that? :) I actually more or less believe in science lol
anonymous
  • anonymous
but science reinforces spirituality
anonymous
  • anonymous
It is more and more everyday yes. Alright have you ever heard the story of Lilith in christianity? :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
can u write me a poem
anonymous
  • anonymous
Of course!!! :) what kind of poem would u like i can try to find some passionate music to listen to and write a poem off that :) What kind of poem?
anonymous
  • anonymous
olivia and me are doing the same project
anonymous
  • anonymous
Ahhhhh i see :) So what do u need first? I mean the first requirement lol
anonymous
  • anonymous
hmm i guess a i want a hyku
anonymous
  • anonymous
haiku
anonymous
  • anonymous
thx
anonymous
  • anonymous
u want her to write haiku??impossible>..
anonymous
  • anonymous
haha nevahh i have written good haikus :) here go to this link hold on i will post it and u can go ther :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
ok
anonymous
  • anonymous
btw wats ur real name
anonymous
  • anonymous
m sory i underestimated u dolly...:)
anonymous
  • anonymous
himanish
anonymous
  • anonymous
Oh and my real name is Ivy ^_^
anonymous
  • anonymous
and people often do that :) but i show them up in the end :D
anonymous
  • anonymous
Deep inside It was a rush What a rush
anonymous
  • anonymous
LOL ur obsessed :) Wellllllll try this pellet!!!! : watch the video oh and i think lively is MUCHO prettier than alba!!!!!! >.<
anonymous
  • anonymous
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lQlIhraqL7o
anonymous
  • anonymous
oh and ignore those comments...... ^_^
anonymous
  • anonymous
have you ever read emily wingspaninson?
anonymous
  • anonymous
Yesh i have read her she is one of my favorites :) my moms favorites too :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
this is a favorite of mine: "Lad of Athens Faithful Be, To Thyself and Mystery, All the Rest is Perjury"
anonymous
  • anonymous
:D i rly like that one too :) Do any of you think that i could make it as a song writer? OHH!! and dont leave until i post one more poem ples?? :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
well, maybe like death metal ;)
anonymous
  • anonymous
jk
anonymous
  • anonymous
haha!! i listen to rock/metal anyways :D
anonymous
  • anonymous
ok i am posting the last poem :) hold on .
mattfeury
  • mattfeury
songwriting is dependent on lyrics, but you also have to be able to craft a good melody. that is the basis of writing pop songs.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Fierce. Cant push ME down. Cant make ME frown. Been a rebel all my life. Baby im full of strife. Cant make me go lame. I'll never be tame. I am who i am, thats just it. So if you dont like it, quit the pellet . I never hold back, not ever. I hide it well, but im real clever. When you feel your vision goin hazy. Babe thats me, makin you crazy. I may be ditzy but im not a fool. And to hell with acting cool. You could say im high fashion. My whole world is passion. Ill ask you why but im not into gettin high. Cuz for crying out loud. who cares whos in "the crowd" This is Ivy god damn this is exactly who i am like it? :) its pretty old >.<
anonymous
  • anonymous
i think the use of vulgar/obscenities can actually detract despite the potential verbal force behind, if you could expand upon the idea to truly represent and create an euphemism in a way...sounds like alanis morisette
anonymous
  • anonymous
plus, young kids may be viewing this content
anonymous
  • anonymous
:D!!!! u kno who alanis morisette is?!?!? not many people do!!!! :D and yes like i said i was younger >.< therefore i wasnt as skilled a poet :P
anonymous
  • anonymous
right, you could read some Shelly or Keats, they're a little melancholy and romantic...british romanticism maybe be a genre you're interested...then you can move on to other topics
anonymous
  • anonymous
well, maybe not a little, more like a lot
anonymous
  • anonymous
Ahh, i see alright i will research them :) Oh and maybe not a little more like a lot which part were you pertaining to? :) >.< confused
anonymous
  • anonymous
a lot melancholy
anonymous
  • anonymous
Ahhh makes sense :) I more or less like the fierce, individualistic, romantic, hard to get genre :) kno anything revolving those subjects? :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
have you tried really crafting a poem, manipulating syllables, using literary tools like consonance, etc...following strict rhyme patterns
anonymous
  • anonymous
lord byron
anonymous
  • anonymous
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lord_Byron
anonymous
  • anonymous
he joined the war for independence in greece...though he was british
anonymous
  • anonymous
No, i havent :( You see when i get in the zone, it gets blurry and i just write. Idk thats something i got to work on lol
anonymous
  • anonymous
Are you british? You are talking about a lot of British famous people.
anonymous
  • anonymous
well, you could write then get back to it
anonymous
  • anonymous
True!!!! Yea that is pretty good idea, camt believe i never thought of it... >.<
anonymous
  • anonymous
yeah, so you can hone your craft
anonymous
  • anonymous
Yep :) Thanks Overall do you think i have talent? At all? :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
you're certainly talented to expose your passions, but talent is nothing without practice, and you're doing some good practice just expressing yourself. so right, keep at it, but the best poets truly excel and expression and manipulating words to create new verbal experiences
anonymous
  • anonymous
they can capture emotional states and experiences vividly, perhaps as vividly as reality
anonymous
  • anonymous
Right :) Alright u have helped me a lot :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
for example take the word you seem to use often, such as "strife," what do you mean by that? you must be referring to past actions and events, so maybe you can elaborate upon the events
anonymous
  • anonymous
Ahhhh yes i do use that often ^_^ You noticed. Lol hmmmmm in which poem do u mean maybe i can make changes? .....
anonymous
  • anonymous
doesn't matter the poem, well, the first i started commenting on earlier today
anonymous
  • anonymous
just the concept is what we're focused on
anonymous
  • anonymous
Alright. How bout today if i get in the zone i will write a poem, would you mind helping me critique it? :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
sure
anonymous
  • anonymous
:D Thanks. you just seem to know ur stuff :) See ya later!!??
anonymous
  • anonymous
cool, see you, good luck
anonymous
  • anonymous
luv 'em
anonymous
  • anonymous
im glad :)

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