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Here is a new poem of mine.... "Passage to my Heart" Not my best but tell me what you think!! (: post it in a comment

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  1. anonymous
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    Passage to my Heart Electric, sending shocks through me Eyes so intense, hear me plea! Why must you try so hard To push me away, put up a guard I just want to know who you are I want to know every blemish every scar But you wont let me in your heart I only have your words of art I tried, kept you coming but your words are mind numbing This game we play Those things they say Are they truly real? Is that how you feel? Tell me, am I someone you can trust? I feel all we have is lust I want so much more Than to be seen as a whore I am not this word i spoke My pride wont be broke I am me, heart and soul I wont be some lustful goal I want to be loved for who i am Not just my body god damn!! This world we live in today Our morals are all astray Thinking its okay, to hurt to please Sure, i can be a tease Sorry but i just cant be tied down Try, in the fog you will drown I will send you out, to get lost like a toy, you'll be tossed I wont let you put me on a string You are MY plaything So unless you can show your true self You'll be stored away, put on the shelf To cage me, capture my heart, my mind Be my eyes to see when i am blind Always be there giving everything i need All of my pleas, you must heed Only speak what you mean Treat me like a queen If you can somehow manage all this Then luck will first grant you my kiss If you never leave my side I will no longer hide My heart will be yours To open my locked doors Are you good enough? Because i may just call your bluff My love clearly is hard to earn But my passion will burn Well good luck now Chow!

  2. anonymous
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    AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D:D:D:D:D

  3. anonymous
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    Thanks!!! haha i was told its not my best ^^

  4. anonymous
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    I know but I liked it a lot:D. I love how you rhymed who I am with god damn:P Great:D

  5. anonymous
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    Haha ^_^ yea one of my favorite cussing rhymes ^^ i wonder if the one called Desire is appropriate for openstudy :P

  6. anonymous
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    Lmao, I bet it would be, it's not thaaat bad:P

  7. anonymous
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    Desire Oh god, I want you so much MMM.. I wanna feel your touch... I need you! Remove the disguise! I just must have, one look in your eyes I want to feel you kiss my lips I want to feel you hold my hips.. Oh why cant you be all mine? I need to climb you like a vine I must feel you touch my breast I'd love to fall asleep on your chest. Now just 1 thing i want to know What are the lengths your willing to go? To make me feel good, inside and out To make me moan, maybe shout Touch me, lick me, make me feel good? Would you do what you should? Come on, give me all you've got Make my body get so hot. I know you want me, you know its true. But clearly the decision's up to you...

  8. anonymous
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    its kinda erotic :P but yea ^^

  9. anonymous
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    good one

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