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  1. Owlfred
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  2. anonymous
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    As the pink and orange weave together to paint a summer sunset the water of a stream is in my toes and the grass is soft beneath my golden brown hand the brezze tickls my skin and blows my soft hair as the wind whispers in my ear

  3. anonymous
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    Nice, can I make a suggestion?:)

  4. anonymous
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    yes yes you can

  5. anonymous
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    Ok, dont be offended but I think it would flow better if you split it up. I feel that its more of a runnon sentence:)

  6. anonymous
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    thats just a draft like i didnt care bout the punctuation just wanted to see how it would sound then do all the editing?

  7. anonymous
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    ok, cool(Ivy's idea) have you tried listening to music as you right that has to deal with the mood?

  8. anonymous
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    yep i was actully doing that

  9. anonymous
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    :D It works AWESOME @ Arky hey do u know Krumbell on AP? He does the listening to music thing too!! :D

  10. anonymous
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    Hmm then try dead silence. or being outside (:

  11. anonymous
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    oh i got one!

  12. anonymous
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    Sometimes, just writing without editing in poem form works really good. Editing can destroy the mood sometimes:)

  13. anonymous
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    Ill just randomly think of something right now...here we goooo...

  14. anonymous
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    The ash glistens with a heavenly tear, washing away all I fear, then I laugh and fall near, to that place I wonce held dear.

  15. anonymous
    • 5 years ago
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    Yea i can totally ruin a piece of writing.... especially poems.. the passion can be removed... thas why so much of my poetry is so.. RAW... lol like this!! : RAW You wanna know what i am? im raw. I'm real im me, and i leave u in awe I don't ever hide. I'm not afraid to be this girl inside I tackle you, i attack I'm not afraid to act a little wack! I wont let your words hurt my core But i WILL always leave you wanting more Dont let this exterior fool your mind Oh please, search until you find This heart that swells with love and joy but treat me with care, im not a toy Oh please don't think im mean just because unlike you i don't need to make a scene im real im me, and i leave you in awe This is what i am, im RAW

  16. anonymous
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    heh (:

  17. anonymous
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    Raw is always better...usually:)

  18. anonymous
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    Ya.... usually ^_^

  19. anonymous
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    wow thats really good keep up all the awesome poems

  20. anonymous
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    that is brilliant

  21. anonymous
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    Haha thanks!! ;D

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