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I am a man who lives no love
my heart has a kind of steel
inside my veins runs iced blood
I don´t take account of how you feel.
There´s no any emotion
I always rather to live alone.
Once you were my sunrise
My sweet hopes and my ideals
I´d spend my times by your side
But your feelings weren´t real.
Now I understand that in the end the damage was done.
I am here with no fear of life,
If you were cold, now I am twofold
So there´s no sorrow, because you´re out of my world.
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Not bad, but English needs correcting in a couple of places:
"There´s no any emotion" should be "There´s no emotion"
"I always rather to live alone" - "I would rather always live alone" or "I wish to always live alone" or maybe you mean "Oh, that I'd always lived alone!"
"I´d spend my times by your side" - "I'd spend my time by your side"
nice poem otherwise, but i hope it doesn't reflect you mental state of being!
Great, Mangodurian. My english is bad because I´m not a native english speaker (I´m a brazilian). Thanks for corrections. By this way, I learn a little more. Thanks again. P.S: I am not a iced man, because of this I´ve written this poem.