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This is an essay I made about "I am the captain of my soul" Please check my grammar and correct me if i'm wrong. You may chang the positioning of the sentences All humans have the privelage to choose what is right or what is wrong. We are also the one who will make our own decision, no matter what others will say we are still liable on our decision. The line "I am the captain of my soul" means that we are the one who is in control of are doings and we are the one who will decide for ourselves. Thanks!
*we are also the one(S) who will make our own decision(S), no matter what others will say we are still liable on our decision(S). The line "I am captain of my soul" means that we are the one(S) who (ARE) in control of (OUR OWN) doings and we are the one(S) who will decide for ourselves.
moongazer note how you use we, then that means more than one person and hence you can't say just "one" but need to say "ones"
"liable on our decision." should be "liable FOR our decision(s).", too :)