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can you help me write the best thesis i can and help me to improve on it Achebe believes that traditional practices is better than modernizing everything because modernization would start the process of making mistakes whereas the traditional ways had an efficient system that didn't need any changes to be made, "If it ain't broke don't fix it".

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  1. xcribbledhearts Group Title
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    are you reading things fall apart?

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    and what is your prompt?

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    Let's start checking your grammar and explain us what you need.

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    That thesis needs to be adjusted grammatically as suggested above. I'd also note that this is a run on sentence. There are a good 3-4 sentences worth of information there.

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    Shorten it and correct grammar like they've said: depending on the context "traditional practices" can probably be changed to just "tradition," making the "is" grammatically correct. Then change "modernizing everything" and just use "modernization." then use the "because" and follow up with a newly-worded "if it ain't broke don't fix it." EX: "Achebe believes that tradition is better than modernization because *newly-worded ain't broke don't fix it.*" It's not perfect but it would work. :)

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    In Things Fall Apart Chinua Achebe demonstrates that modernized practices are damaging. You don't have to put everything you're gunna talk about in your paper in the thesis. Leave the rest of the paper to do that.

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    Also, what are the modernized practices actually damaging? You can put something like ... Achebe demonstrates that modernized practices are damaging to... culture... masculinity... whatever you're trying to prove.

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