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smurfy14

  • 4 years ago

How can I make this sentence cleaner?

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  1. smurfy14
    • 4 years ago
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    Edward goes back-and-forth between the descriptions of those in the grace of God and those who are out to emphasize how much happier the ones in the grace of God are.

  2. AdequateDisclosure
    • 4 years ago
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    Don't jump from one idea to another.

  3. anatawaSUI
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    Edward goes back-and-forth between the descriptions of those in the grace of God; those who are out to emphasize how much happier the ones in the grace of God are. // I reccomend using adequate's advice...

  4. smurfy14
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    well i already know that I wanted you to rewrite it in a more clearer way.

  5. Genevievera
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    Edward alternates descriptions of two distinct groups: those who are in God's grace; and those who explain how much happier those in God's grace are, relative to others.

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