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Please help me in doing this I need some suggestions and please fix my poem if i made mistakes. it should be 5 stanzas with 4 lines I already start ted this stanzas: Oh God the mighty God You gave me the best kind of love You gave me joy when i'm in pain You gave me strength when i am weak You made the light that makes me see You made the humans that makes me want to live You made the breath-taking landscapes that makes me dream Oh God the creator you are so extraordinary When I'm alone You are always there When I made mistakes You always forgive me
You are my friend You are my idol You are my inspiration You are my protector
i think so.
is my poem good?
yes it's good.
did I made mistakes?
but you can edit it like this:-oh god than no need of oh mighty god.
please help me in putting punctuation marks
and it not when i am in pain ,it when i was in pain.
what do you suggest for my last stanza?
can you bring some ryhming words with it.
it will be ended beautifully.
anywayz i like your poem.
ok Thanks! :)
hey i realy think if you polish your skill little bit more you can be a fine poet.
what about this? for the ending You are special to me Cause you make me see All the beautiful things around me ................................??????
oh thanks !but this was ,i think you are a beginner.if so you have a long way to go before you sleep.
wow! thanks for the compliment, actually this is the first time that I made a poem this long.
that's why it is not that good
see i told you,but this was a very nice poem than.
and i am also making mistakes at my grammar,nevertheless, I hope i can make my grammar better before i graduate from high school and I will try to make poems if I have nothing to do, because of your compliment Thanks :)
I hope that I can be an engineer and a good English speaker
see no one is 100% perfect ,not even me.but only one thing gives you 90% output and that will be practice and 10% god will give you.ok!friend.
Awww Moongazer i love it !!! ^ ^ and God Bless U!
Its so peeeeerty!