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If you are a native English speaker, please proofread my essay with comments. i will give my deepest thank to you. Please include about 80 words for comment. Write an essay to describe your home. My home is located in a small, quiet town. It is a waterfront house with three floors. The house which is located near the idyllic beach, is cozy and comfortable all year round with the breeze from the coast. The front garden is surrounded by a fence. Rodents are sometimes found there. They love eating the fruit, vegetables and wheat grown in the garden. I do not have to mow the lawn. I always ge

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    As far as it goes, it reads fine to me. It is informative and interesing.

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    Might phrase it in this manner: It is a waterfront house with three floors, located near an idyllic beach It is cozy . It is cozy, and the breeze from the coast keeps it compatant all year long. The front garden is surrounded by a fence. Rodents are sometimes found there. They love eating the fruit, vegetables and wheat grown in the garden. I do not have to mow the lawn. I always ge 19 days ago •Report Abuse Share this Question Tweet this Question

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    It sounds pretty good :)

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    It is very imformative so far,I like it

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    My home is located in a small, quiet town. It is a waterfront house with three floors, located near an idyllic beach. A breeze from the coast keeps my home cozy and comfortable throughout the year. The front garden is surrounded by a fence, (and has what inside of the garden that stands out to you). Sometimes, I find little rodents scurrying about the garden. They love eating the fruits, vegetables, and wheat I have growing. (Expand on this idea before moving on to the lawn - cause a smoother transition.) I do not have to mow the lawn (why). I always ge...............

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