moongazer
  • moongazer
This is my poem. please correct all the mistakes that I made and help me in improving it. I am not good in writing poem. :)
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moongazer
  • moongazer
The title is " The happiness of Success" Fear to the unknown tired of all the failures regret to the things I missed Creating many mistakes You must not give up You should strive hard to achieve your desired goal giving you a feeling of fulfillment Inspiration give you determination to continue in achieving your goal Don't be afraid in exploring new ideas for it will give you a fresh knowledge At the end of all the obstacles you fought You will enjoy the happiness of success It should be a poem with 5 stanzas of 4 lines
anonymous
  • anonymous
try to write about the drying human initiative and our being trapped in an illusion of the truth
anonymous
  • anonymous
moon pls reply

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anonymous
  • anonymous
ur line of inspiration can be modified..
moongazer
  • moongazer
I'm back now. My teacher said that we should write a poem about our success
anonymous
  • anonymous
ok.... success can be in the wordly or material sense...
anonymous
  • anonymous
to be successful u need a source of inspiration which can be a thought eg.marxism ,a man eg gandhi, or god....
moongazer
  • moongazer
Did I made any grammatical mistakes?
anonymous
  • anonymous
for eg....walking on the street of life being alone in the meddling crowd i keep on trying to find a light which can lead me to a eternal life
anonymous
  • anonymous
no , u were fine with the grammar
anonymous
  • anonymous
how was my poetry?
anonymous
  • anonymous
challenges,hindrances keep on coming but i m a rock still and steady, this world is just a faction of the universe that guides me
anonymous
  • anonymous
i used a metaphor of a rock
moongazer
  • moongazer
Your poetry is good.
moongazer
  • moongazer
I just need to fill up the missing lines.
anonymous
  • anonymous
what are those line?
moongazer
  • moongazer
it should have four lines
moongazer
  • moongazer
could you give me an idea what to add?
anonymous
  • anonymous
ok.....the goal may be a distant dream but u are a survivor not a broken soul
anonymous
  • anonymous
ideas are the seeds of a bright future full of prosperity and life
moongazer
  • moongazer
inspiration gives you determination to continue in achieving your goal Let not haters stop you in achieving your dream otherwise make them as your inspiration Don't be afraid in exploring new ideas for it will give you a fresh knowledge At the end of all the obstacles you fought You will enjoy the happiness of success
moongazer
  • moongazer
I added "Let not haters stop you in achieving your dream otherwise make them as your inspiration" could you improve it I think it sounds bad :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
let not ur critics hinder u from achieving ur goals take inspiration from the good present in them
moongazer
  • moongazer
Thanks for that. That is the word that I am looking for. ^_^
anonymous
  • anonymous
ok.......now what?
anonymous
  • anonymous
u are in which grade?
moongazer
  • moongazer
4th year high school, I am not that good in English and I am not a Native English speaker
moongazer
  • moongazer
inspiration gives you determination to continue in achieving your goal Let not haters stop you in achieving your dream otherwise make them as your inspiration Don't be afraid in exploring new ideas for it will give you a fresh knowledge Don't be afraid to ask someone for help For they are here to help you After all the challenges, and hindrances You have surpassed You will realize that anything is possible If you just have perseverance and determination I already added some lines. could you Improve it?

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