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RozziyRuinz

  • 2 years ago

tell me watcha think =} : we live in the city of sin we fight til death wins frozen i fall but with your touch , u make me crawl away from the light away from this life my pain is taken over my soul my eyes cant see whats there for me im broken inside, cant you see ?! fallen so deeply into this nightmare can you hear me screaming , get me out of here Oh, im shaking senseless my mind races for you ill cross every mountain just to save someone like you.. Not to good. Better ones to come =] thanks. <3

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  1. fortheloveofscience
    • 2 years ago
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    its quite nice

  2. ayyaz
    • 2 years ago
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    rubbish

  3. fortheloveofscience
    • 2 years ago
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    huh?

  4. FlounderFace
    • 2 years ago
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    Nice flow, :) I would suggest watching out for parts that are too "wordy", poems with a good balance are always more interesting to read! :)

  5. fortheloveofscience
    • 2 years ago
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    that's what called intellectual criticism..

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