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osanseviero

  • 4 years ago

Can anyone please tell me if the is any grammar mistake in this? (it is really important)

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  1. osanseviero
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    The Kingdom of Saudi Arabia has tried since 1947 to include in the agenda the independence of Palestine. Saudi Arabia was not the unique Arabian country to try this: Egypt, Iraq, Lebanon and Syria have also tried to make Palestine an independent country. The Middle East Peace Process remains a priority for this government. There is a crucial need of a long-term peace agreement between Israel and Palestine for making Palestine an independent state. Saudi Arabia believes it is a duty to support the Palestinian cause and to stop the severe Israeli aggressions against the Palestinian people. Both the Arab Peace Initiative and The Roadmap are good solutions for this problem. Our Royal Highness Prince Abdullah bin Abdul Aziz, our last crown prince of the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia, presented our initiative calling full Israeli withdrawal from all the territories occupied since June of 1967, in implementation of Security Council resolutions 242 and 338. The Roadmap, stated by the quartet, searches a permanent two-state solution. As part of the Arab League, our royal highness will recognize Palestine as a country and will try everything to prevent the six-days war in which the Arab states lost over 13 thousand men.

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    or just suggestions to improve it

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    ok gracias

  4. anonymous
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    There are a few other missteps you might correct. Here is one possibility . . . The Kingdom of Saudi Arabia has tried since 1947 to include the independence of Palestine in its agenda. Saudi Arabia is not the only Arabian country to have tried this: Egypt, Iraq, Lebanon and Syria have also tried to make Palestine an independent country. The Middle East Peace Process remains a priority for the government of Saudi Arabia. There is a crucial need for a long-term peace agreement between Israel and Palestine for making Palestine an independent state. [Or -- The need for a long-term peace agreement between Israel and Palastine is critical for making Palestine an independent state.] Saudi Arabia believes it has a duty to support the Palestinian cause and to stop the severe Israeli aggressions against the Palestinian people. Both the Arab Peace Initiative and The Roadmap are good solutions for this problem. Our Royal Highness Prince Abdullah bin Abdul Aziz, our last crown prince of the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia, presented our initiative calling full Israeli withdrawal from all the territories occupied since June of 1967, in implementation of Security Council resolutions 242 and 338. The Roadmap, stated by the quartet, searches[?] a permanent two-state solution. As part of the Arab League, our royal highness would recognize Palestine as a country and would do everything in his power to prevent another war like the six-day war in which the Arab states lost over 13 thousand men. * * * As far as I can determine (this is not something I typically deal with), there should be no comma between "our Royal Highness" and "Prince Abdullah bin Abdul Aziz." The name is *not* considered a restatement of the title. The two are instead conjoined into one phrase.

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