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depends what your essay is on.
African Americans have been segregated for generation. Since slavery, they have been put to work and when they finally got their freedom they've felt discriminated against for their personality and color. Dealing with threats and segregation the African American society never seemed to change. In the African American society separating blacks from the white community was a law and breaking it will have consequences. “the segregation of public education in both the north and south was not firmly fixed in law…those in the north were constrained by custom and racism from sending their children to white schools” (School Segregation). This means that African American families had to move and find education in a different location in the community or have their children excluded from school permanently.
its about the book the help
im just wondering if i should use this as my next cd
“What we need in the United States is not division; what we need in the United States is not hatred; what we need in the United States is not violence and lawlessness, but is love and wisdom, and compassion toward one another, and a feeling of justice toward those who still suffer within our country, whether they be white or whether they be black” (Kennedy). should i use it or shorten it or not use it at all?
i think you should use it! When you use it you are adding credibility to your essay which is good
but is it to long? and how does my first paragraph sound?
you first para. sounds really good when i first read it,it brought my attention. are you planning to add the quote in the 1st para.?
ya haha i need 3 CD but it just seems way to long haha
i dont think you should include that in your first para. you should add it throughout your essay. It's your essay i cant really tell you what to write or dont. But that is just my opinion.
i acutally thought the same thing but i wasnt sure haha
hahaha alright :)
what do u think about my introduction?
Maids were amongst the likes of slaves in the 1960’s. Racial tensions were high and discrimination was fluttering. This is depicted in the novel The Help by Kathryn Stockett. Stockett describes the lives of African Americans and the women’s roles during the 1950’s and 1960’s. There were many racist acts toward African Americans especially towards Minny and Aibileen two black women working as maids in the novel. The story takes place in Jackson Mississippi where a young white woman named Skeeter lived for most her life. Skeeter fought for Civil Rights secretly. She helped the maids by trying to publish a book about their lives as maids and how they are treated. This book is a great illustration of how African Americans lived back in the 1960’s. During the 1950's and 1960's African Americans never seem to be equal with the white society due to the color of their skin, and their different personalities. Blacks have been discriminated against for generations and separated from whites by law. Segregation has oppressed blacks for years. For example there are different public bathrooms for colored and for whites. There were water fountains for black and only colored schools. There were laws prohibiting black from haves certain rights which lead to civil rights movement’s that lead to violence and chaos. African Americans are threatened by groups if they don't follow the law or rules. In the book The Help by Kathryn Stockett, she shows how racism and discrimination destroys the chance of the American dream for African American. the thesis is at the bottum my teach wants it like that and she wants it 2 paragraphs
I think thats really,really good. Perfect don't change a thing.
Could you help me? Thanks for the medal.
me lol? uhh idk i suck at this!
that sounds really good! :) ... i think you write better then i do