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Is this a sexy 3rd topic sentence paragraph? In the 1950's and throughout the the 1960 the modern Civil Rights Moment was a time period where social activism aimed at achieving social economic and political equality for African Americans.

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  1. Matt6288
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    1960's

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  2. drpeppergal
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    I'm having a hard time reading it, it don't really flow. Maybe some punctuation?

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  3. philips13
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    The civil rights movement was a time period? I thought it was a group engaging in civil disobedience to change a society.

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  4. Matt6288
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    Your right let me give it some agustments.

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    I thought i mentioned that by saying "where social activism aimed at achieving social economic and political equality for African Americans."

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    how about this drepeppergal In the 1950's and throughout the 1960's the modern Civil Rights Moment was a time period where social activism aimed at achieving social economic political equality for African Americans. can u edit it?

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    i like it! I really can think of another way to write it

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  8. Matt6288
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    Thank you at least someone appreciates my work! ;) haha I'm about to do a lead in tell me what you think :)

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    ok

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    I would put "was" in between activism and aimed.

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    I would also put an "a" in between achieving and social. And is that "moment" or "movement"?

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    Btw I love the movie The Help.

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    In the 1950's and throughout the 1960's the modern Civil Rights Movement was a time period where social activism aimed at achieving a social economic political equality for African Americans. Aggressive nonviolent bus boycott is a demonstration of the power the community organized by the role of people playing in the fighting for freedom that was sparked by a famous African American Rosa Parks. "Rosa Parks's refusal to give up her seat for a white passenger, the bus boycott engaged all of Montgomery's African American community in a nonviolent, mass protest of Jim Crow segregation that spanned 381 days, financially crippling the Montgomery City Lines." Rosa Parks sometimes called the mother of Civil Rights Movement was a great African American because of her bravery for not allowing a white man to take her set. There and ya it movement haha how about now any fixing?..

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    it was to sad

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    looks good to me. U R right it was sad.

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    R U from the south?

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  17. Matt6288
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    im from cali san diego and thx :)

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