...the kind of watch that does not need a battery to operate, 'neither does it require winding to operate'...
any grammatical error in the 2nd line? i feel weird after reading it
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Yes, that "neither" is out of place. It ought, at the very least, to be "nor."
...the kind of watch that does not need a battery to operate, nor does it require winding to operate...
It's still somewhat awkward. You might also do this, getting rid of that double phrase "to operate" --
...the kind of watch that does not need a battery, nor does it require winding, to operate...
Or this, trimming even further --
...the kind of watch that requires neither a battery nor winding to operate...