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Hi can someone help me with the grammar errors.... please
The Math and Computer Science Club would like to contribute to the enhancement of the math department by updating the math and computer science curriculum, the pictures of the math faculty and staff, signs or directions to the math lab, and more. As you could see, we already started decorating the math and computer science club wall. I would like to ask you if it is possible that we can take pictures of each individual professor tomorrow around 1-2pm? I believe our department is one of the most important and most visit on campus, hence it should have a different look and I would like to help with that. I look forward to hearing from your answer. Best,
The first paragraph is OK. Here is a rewrite of the rest. There are just a few tweaks. As you can see, we have already started decorating the Math and Computer Science Club wall. With your permission, we would like to take a picture of each professor tomorrow at around 2:00 p.m. I believe our department is one of the most important, and most visited, on campus. It should stand out, and I would like to help.
"...by updating the math and computer science curriculum" is this curriculum only considered one? or are they separate? if they are separate..then it should be curricula
You're welcome. Also, Igbasallote has a good point that I didn't think of.