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physicsme

  • 3 years ago

Finding Hope That little gleam, I see it, Deep within my heart finally! A drop from the sun, it shines, It'll caress me with its light, And end all misery finally! I raised my hand towards it, To feel it and bask within, But it hurt, oh, it burned, It's not the ray I seek, but a fire of my pain, flames burning my every beat, Soon, it'll spread far and wide, My heart will be nothing but ashes. Comments?

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  1. ujjwal
    • 3 years ago
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    Speechless... superb.. Hats off... :D

  2. ujjwal
    • 3 years ago
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    Needs lot of improvement though...

  3. nilankshi
    • 3 years ago
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    nice poem...

  4. hkaur
    • 3 years ago
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    its awesome..fantastic !! :)

  5. apoorvk
    • 3 years ago
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    @physicsme ?

  6. physicsme
    • 3 years ago
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    yes

  7. apoorvk
    • 3 years ago
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    done.

  8. physicsme
    • 3 years ago
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    :)

  9. apoorvk
    • 3 years ago
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    (because my limited vocabulary cannot find words to praise you enough)

  10. physicsme
    • 3 years ago
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    (good! because I have no words of how to thank you so many time :) )

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