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  • 2 years ago

This keeps popping into my head i guess its a poem of some sort what do you think? I am but black against the white. A bluejay with no blue. A cowboy with no horse. I am the blue rose among the red. The mouse with no tail Why was i born into this world i don't know. The reason i see in none. But a reason i was born there is.

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  1. AngelsUndoing12
    • 2 years ago
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    AMAZING! and fits rite into mi life ur good

  2. Wolfboy
    • 2 years ago
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    ?

  3. AngelsUndoing12
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    ? lol i like the poem

  4. Wolfboy
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    Thx this just keeps poping in my head so i decided to tell it.

  5. AngelsUndoing12
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    cool

  6. katiebear204
    • 2 years ago
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    This is truly amazing <3

  7. Wolfboy
    • 2 years ago
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    I dont see whats amazing in it

  8. Wolfboy
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    it just popped into my head

  9. katiebear204
    • 2 years ago
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    cause i can relate. it is really good!

  10. katiebear204
    • 2 years ago
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    dont put yourself down! be proud!

  11. Wolfboy
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    ...ok

  12. AngelsUndoing12
    • 2 years ago
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    i realte to it too he doesnt get it haha its an amazing work

  13. Wolfboy
    • 2 years ago
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    I know what you mean by relate to his poem this poem like explains most of who i am

  14. mud116
    • 2 years ago
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    WOW wolfboy this is pretty good

  15. Wolfboy
    • 2 years ago
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    thx

  16. mud116
    • 2 years ago
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    Like serious I might quote this with your permission when I do my speech next week

  17. Wolfboy
    • 2 years ago
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    Uh can you say i wrote it then if you do go ahead

  18. Wolfboy
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    But i have had people take my credit from me alot so plz dont take credit

  19. mud116
    • 2 years ago
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    Oh of course I wouldn't do it without saying you wrote it! Thanks bro ^_^

  20. Wolfboy
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    its ok

  21. mud116
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    I don't advantage like that

  22. Wolfboy
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    ok

  23. Wolfboy
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    Man my poem is attracting alot of attention

  24. Wolfboy
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    its kinda neat

  25. ZhangYan
    • 2 years ago
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    Wow Wolfboy its nice poem :D

  26. Wolfboy
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    Um thx

  27. Wolfboy
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    ZhangYan i cant message you unless you fan me

  28. katiebear204
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    hahah i told you, you write really well

  29. Wolfboy
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    Plz people who read this leave feedback

  30. fredloser
    • 2 years ago
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    it is interesting hard to follow

  31. fredloser
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    but i like it

  32. starrhunter
    • 2 years ago
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    i love it. the use of metaphors and imagery is stunning :) 8/10 try to make more flow. needs a bit of work around the edges but the prospect is good.

  33. Wolfboy
    • 2 years ago
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    Tx guys it popped into my head over and over so i wrote it down

  34. apoorvk
    • 2 years ago
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    It's good - in the sense that it's pretty *raw* and ironic. But you could make this rhyme easily and bring more flow if you like. Still, a pretty good job! :)

  35. Wolfboy
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    Thx

  36. PINAY17
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    Luv the poem, it's very deep, and inspiring to tell people we need to figure out who we truly are and what we are not :) GOod job, you should title it though =)

  37. Wolfboy
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    Thx for reading (EVERYONE!)

  38. Wolfboy
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    I will tittle it

  39. Wolfboy
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    THX!

  40. Cemantha
    • 2 years ago
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    wow th was really nice

  41. Wolfboy
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    Thx

  42. Wolfboy
    • 2 years ago
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    I made this myself

  43. Kasi
    • 2 years ago
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    THat is amazing

  44. Wolfboy
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    Thx kasi

  45. vitahot21
    • 2 years ago
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    wow!

  46. SOUTHERNPRIDE
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    sounds sort of depressing kool

  47. Wolfboy
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    I guess but it is filled with alot of meaning. Alot of people can connect to this

  48. SOUTHERNPRIDE
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    tru dat i get wat ur sayin 2 its a kool poem.

  49. Wolfboy
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    Do you think i should call it- Who Am I?

  50. Wolfboy
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    Or do you guys have any ideas?

  51. Kasi
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    yea

  52. SOUTHERNPRIDE
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    or what am i?

  53. Wolfboy
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    Thats good to but does anyone else have ideas?

  54. SOUTHERNPRIDE
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    i got a poem but the only one's i am good at are the complete oposet at u think bout it

  55. SOUTHERNPRIDE
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    The summer's heat is nothing to compare to her warmth. The springs blooming flowers are not even close the beauty of her Smile. And honeysuckle has no comparison to her lips. She is my world.

  56. Wolfboy
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    It needs alittle better flow you should ask it as a question

  57. SOUTHERNPRIDE
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    kool thanks

  58. Cemantha
    • 2 years ago
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    my email is gttn blown up by this lol.

  59. Wolfboy
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    XD

  60. Wolfboy
    • 2 years ago
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    I am trying to find a good tittle

  61. Wolfboy
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    these are my ideas so far Who am i? or what am i?

  62. timo86m
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    reminds me of the song a horse with no name :P

  63. Wolfboy
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    lol do you have any ideas for the name?

  64. timo86m
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    I seen many similar writings like this. It has a lot of irony in it.

  65. Wolfboy
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    Yea but what i like about this poem is alot of people can connect to this

  66. timo86m
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    yah cuzz no one seems to fit in anywhere :)

  67. Wolfboy
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    Yes. But do you have ideas for what the name could be?

  68. timo86m
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    I like hte line I am the blue rose among the red. Make that your title :)

  69. Wolfboy
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    hmm that is a good idea

  70. cheeto365
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    good poem

  71. Wolfboy
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    Angels is back :D

  72. AngelsUndoing12
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    wow wolf u got ppl all over this nice

  73. Wolfboy
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    I know its crazy

  74. Wolfboy
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    I might start writing more now lol

  75. AngelsUndoing12
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    you so should.. i would love it.. btw r u in flvs?

  76. Wolfboy
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    what?

  77. ash2326
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    It's great @Wolfboy poem suits me

  78. Wolfboy
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    Thx a lot i appreciate it And i think that alot of people can connect to this

  79. TheOlympicnomad
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    WoW @Wolfboy if this Masterpiece just popped in your head you really got a creative mind there that can discover many amazing and impossible things the world yet needs to see and hear ;), All in All this is amazing!! :D.

  80. Wolfboy
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    Thx for your comments and everyone who looked. I was at first thinking that people would think his poem is really bad. But now i see all of the meaning and how people can connect to it. I appreciate all of your support and medals and comments. I am going to start posting more poems now :D

  81. TheOlympicnomad
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    Dude this is inspirational!!, And i would love to see what you can create next ;).

  82. Wolfboy
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    Well i will make sure to post more of my poems that come into my head... Alot of them i keep rejecting until they go away :( BUT thanks to all you guys i now have more confidence in my writings.... Thanx everyone.

  83. Wolfboy
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    Actually i am thinking up some poem ideas right now so if you guys know anything i can write then type it up so it can give me a idea.

  84. gdogthegirl
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    thats really good :)

  85. Wolfboy
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    thx

  86. Wolfboy
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    Anymore comments?

  87. Wolfboy
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    Well guys thanks alot for reading :)

  88. DimDanny
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    noice

  89. TheOlympicnomad
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    Never reject your minds thoughts :), I am glad you decided to let your thoughts sink in and fill your head and stopped rejecting them I once did the same thing i had these thoughts popping in and out of my head but i kept rejecting them because i was to worried with what other people would think of them because they were different then most peoples thoughts that i could rearrange them into a masterpiece if i put the right words in order but i kept rejecting them and they finally disappeared gone forever and i regret rejecting them every single day to what i could of wrote :(, So im glad you didn't reject your thoughts like i did :). You rock @Wolfboy!!.

  90. HaperFink22
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    I really love it, what makes it amazing is the contrast. You have little grammatical errors, other wise brilliant :)

  91. Wolfboy
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    Thx XD i noticed the errors

  92. Hero
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    You're looking for the purpose of life, when the purpose of life is to simply live. Wow, who wouldda thought that the purpose of life is just to live life?

  93. Hero
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    Live life and make it meaningful to you. No one else will do that for you so you have to do it.

  94. Agent_Sniffles
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    SWEET poem Wolf! :D:D

  95. physicsme
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    nice!

  96. Wolfboy
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    thx

  97. wolfgirl
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    I think that it means that you're different than anyone else, you're set apart from those around you. It's really good!

  98. Hero
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    @wolfboy and @wolfgirl awesome :D

  99. wolfgirl
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    Isn't it?

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