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And plz dont comment i am posting another poem
This next one i am posting i like better and the first one needs more work.
Anger I Burn in you eyes after every time he lies. Let me out i say. I cloud your vision with smoke every time they joke. Let me out i say. I Blanket all other feelings when the pain beats healing. Let me out i say. I am who clenches your fist once the insults are never missed. Let me out i say. I am who stands you up faster after being knocked down. Let me out i say. Then comes the day that respect is turned the other way. Let me out i say. And you unleash it all hurting everyone in your way...
I lovee them :)
I have one outta 25 comments..
;P hold onn ;P
I LOVE THIS. You are a wonderful writer.
It sounds like a song<3
Good Job ^_^
5/25 a fourth there
If i am counting right....
I like these Wolfboy, I would encourage you to post more :)
Can I point one mistake here? the last word is breathe.
Yea XD i noticed lol
It is really good. I think you should post those poems!
Well i need 25 comments to do so
Because then enough people will like em
for me to post the others
what if you count how many medals you are getting?
And thanx the the people who commented already
You got 5 already
Plz comment if you want more poems guys. I need 25 different people two comment
If you look on the left there are five people viewing this, so it has to be good. I didn't get this much attention to my poem.
Well v if you want more then coypie and paste this url in chat boxes and yes 8/25
AND a bunch of them are mods so it must be good ;P
And yes i cannot type XD
If everyone who has viewed my poem so far typed a comment i would have already posted my next two poems.
Good work @Wolfboy
Hey, Dim. Lol
think about 25-30 Different people viewed this by now...
maybe, I am trying to help lol
come on, use your medals as comments, they are better, you know! You get bigger smartscore!
Thanx for trying but it is up to the people who like this poem and would like more to comment.
Its Really Nice :) @Wolfboy
thats what? 14/25 or somthin?
Thanx to the people who tried to get comments but i guess not a lot of people like them
No offense, Wolfboy, but I think you might be caring a little too much about what people think of your poems. We OpenStudiers are concerned with other people, as well, so not everyone is going to leave a comment about your poems. I do like both of these poems, and I wish that you would continue to post, even if not many people say their opinion about them. Remember - you can't go through life looking for praise. If you're searching mostly for a critical view of your poems, then I would suggest not being so pushy about them. You're posts are not more important than anyone else's. :) I'm not trying to be rude, but I don't think it's very nice of you to act as though no one cares about your poems. Most of the people in life will not give their opinion about what others do, so you can't assume that they do or don't like something. Next time, I would just be patient and bump your poems, periodically. If you don't get enough feedback, on OpenStudy, I would suggest trying a different site, to see if you can get more comments. Also, remember that not as many people are in the writing section, as they are in some other sections (like math, etc.). I truly wish you all the best in writing your poems! I think you have great promise! :) Keep up the good work! =)
I am just looking for enough people to like them because I do not really like sharing them. But i will post them if i get FEEDBACK i dont care if it is saying that i it really bad and i should never post it. I am not "Looking for praise" i just am not going to share my poems unless i know people will like them and leave feedback. That is all.
Besides all people have to do is type in the word cool or type in a period and click post
Because believe it or not i do not like sharing these i am sharing these because other people like them.
So if they type in a period, then it would show they don't care about your poems. How could you know? They might not like it, but if people give medals or become your fan, then they probably like it.
I have to go, bye!
I understand. I think that "performance anxiety" affects us all. :) Try not to be too nervous or critical of yourself and your poems. I know that it can be a little nerve-wracking to get others opinions or show your work, but remember - others are usually going to be interested, in a positive way, about your work (especially on OpenStudy :) - I've found most of the people, here, to be very kind and helpful). Try to work on building your confidence about showing your work (I know that this is a very hard skill to accomplish). I think you'd be surprised at how gaining confidence in this small area of life will spread to and affect the other areas of your life for the positive. Good luck! :)
Hey guys i am posting another poem right now this poem is very special to me so let me type it in before you say anything
CLOSE IT BEFORE MY ANNOUCEMENT BOX ESPLODES!!!!!!!!!
Disguise I am the book judged by its cover It’s contents not read. On the cover you see a smile happy as can be. But on the inside a face full of pain and misery. My eyes shine like stars flickering in happiness. Inside they are closed tears slightly flowing. My body is fine filled with energy up and running. But inside its beaten and bruised barely able to move. My arms are strong and my hug is fair. But i hold on for life. Trying to find your happiness. My brain seems smart and on. But wants to be off falling apart from the pain. My soul is losing tied up in chain. Cant take anymore want it all to wash away...
I got this idea from a poem i read so i wrote my version.
Nice! I like this! =)
Nice! I like this! =)
Nice work again @Wolfboy
Thx again ash lol
I like the metaphor. The beginning was very powerful. You took a fairly common metaphor and made it unique!
Thank you but uh... In which of the three?
ok i see lol
My newer posted poem is up There ^^^^^^^
Wolf, I used to try and write poetry as well. I enjoy rhyming words to make them sound euphonious. Keep it up man. :D
Wolfboy, you have some talent! I like it! :)
Nice writing i see some of the meanings and is it just me or did you literally "put your feelings on paper" in disguise and anger poems.
Ha, ha - that's what I was wondering, as well, Alphamalewolf.
yea its just those two poems have the most well i guess feelings in them
alpha male wolf you are right i guess i toke years of anger and rage and put it on paper although i have much more i decided to put it on paper then hurt someone with it.
did u get my message :)