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rainbow22

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This is my short essay on what I was like when I was a kid. Can you help me proofread it. Especially the grammatical parts, imperfect vs preterite, Thanks! 1. Cuando era pequeño yo saltaba la cuerda muchas veces con mi amiga, Sara. Yo tenía una colección de sellos también. Yo gustaba leer libros y ver programas infantiles. Yo frecuentemente jugué con mi muñeca y mi oso de peluche. Yo chalaba y contaba chistes con mis amigos a menudo. Yo frecuentemente iba a parque con mi familia. En el parque, nosotros hacíamos un picnic y vimos los fuegos artificiales. Cuando era niña yo estaba muy obedie

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  1. rainbow22
    • 3 years ago
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    obediente y bien educado

  2. TuringTest
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    I would change "Yo frecuentemente jugué" to "me gustaba jugar" I think you also mean to use the word "charlaba" not "chalaba" in the next sentence. "...iba al parque" ^ don't forget the "l" here (contraction "a" + "el") "En el parque, nosotros hacíamos un picnic y veiamos los fuegos artificiales" -can't mix imperfect and perfect unless in this case; both are things you habitually did in that time of your life, therefor both use imperfect. there really is not much room for preterito in this paragraph, and you could have used fewer sentences, but I think with these corrections it's okay.

  3. rainbow22
    • 3 years ago
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    Thank you!

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