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ShotGunGirl

  • 2 years ago

I need crits and suggestions<3 There is no home to return to. The last light fades away. All is lost, the Black sun rises, As Darkness shrouds your way. All good in the world has perished, New eras, no longer ours. The days of man have ended, Replaced with lifeless hours. Moments of death sear all memories Pain is no foreign concept And death lurks in every shadow The smoke of burning and pure hate chokes the trees Losses of nature that signal destruction" Without you Frodo Baggins, this will be our new home.

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  1. ShotGunGirl
    • 2 years ago
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    I didn't mean to close this really. I only need the top part actually corrected and fixed.

  2. ShotGunGirl
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    It is a Lord of the Ring reference so if you do like LOTR let me know!

  3. julianassange
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    Man, this is nice. Good job shotgungirl, seeing there is a guy on your picture.... ok awkward

  4. ShotGunGirl
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    Oh that's Frodo Baggins. He's the one the poem is about<3

  5. julianassange
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    oh, that's cool. Nice description on the setting of the poem

  6. ShotGunGirl
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    Thank you,e That's really nice of you.

  7. julianassange
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    np

  8. julianassange
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    |dw:1339444423889:dw|

  9. ShotGunGirl
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    lol

  10. rtraylor3
    • 2 years ago
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    This is amazing. Really. I wish I could write like that, but I never have enough inspiration.

  11. Xtasy0xy
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    wow its as if this was from the movie itself well done

  12. jollysailorbold
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    Lord of the rings! i love frodo :)

  13. ShotGunGirl
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    Thank you all so much<3 I didn't think it was that great<3

  14. Susan9419
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    wow, your an amazing writer!

  15. r.arena
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    The poem is wonderful, though the smoke line falls out of the rhythm of the poem.

  16. ShotGunGirl
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    Thank you<3 I'll look into changing it.

  17. EncyclopediaKid
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    great poem. but man you must be upsessed with frodo diggins.

  18. ShotGunGirl
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    Yes. Yes a I am. *Baggins

  19. StealerGirly50
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    you are so talented <3

  20. ShotGunGirl
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    Wow, thank you<3 You guys are so sweet.

  21. countonme123
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    nice job :) @ShotGunGirl

  22. ShotGunGirl
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    Thank you so much. I'm glad you all like it so much.

  23. ShotGunGirl
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    I'm going to reopen this question in a new questions.

  24. countonme123
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    kk be sure to close this one

  25. ShotGunGirl
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    I will.

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