anonymous
  • anonymous
I need crits and suggestions<3 There is no home to return to. The last light fades away. All is lost, the Black sun rises, As Darkness shrouds your way. All good in the world has perished, New eras, no longer ours. The days of man have ended, Replaced with lifeless hours. Moments of death sear all memories Pain is no foreign concept And death lurks in every shadow The smoke of burning and pure hate chokes the trees Losses of nature that signal destruction" Without you Frodo Baggins, this will be our new home.
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At vero eos et accusamus et iusto odio dignissimos ducimus qui blanditiis praesentium voluptatum deleniti atque corrupti quos dolores et quas molestias excepturi sint occaecati cupiditate non provident, similique sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollitia animi, id est laborum et dolorum fuga. Et harum quidem rerum facilis est et expedita distinctio. Nam libero tempore, cum soluta nobis est eligendi optio cumque nihil impedit quo minus id quod maxime placeat facere possimus, omnis voluptas assumenda est, omnis dolor repellendus. Itaque earum rerum hic tenetur a sapiente delectus, ut aut reiciendis voluptatibus maiores alias consequatur aut perferendis doloribus asperiores repellat.
schrodinger
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anonymous
  • anonymous
I didn't mean to close this really. I only need the top part actually corrected and fixed.
anonymous
  • anonymous
It is a Lord of the Ring reference so if you do like LOTR let me know!
anonymous
  • anonymous
Man, this is nice. Good job shotgungirl, seeing there is a guy on your picture.... ok awkward

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anonymous
  • anonymous
Oh that's Frodo Baggins. He's the one the poem is about<3
anonymous
  • anonymous
oh, that's cool. Nice description on the setting of the poem
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thank you,e That's really nice of you.
anonymous
  • anonymous
np
anonymous
  • anonymous
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anonymous
  • anonymous
lol
anonymous
  • anonymous
This is amazing. Really. I wish I could write like that, but I never have enough inspiration.
anonymous
  • anonymous
wow its as if this was from the movie itself well done
anonymous
  • anonymous
Lord of the rings! i love frodo :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thank you all so much<3 I didn't think it was that great<3
anonymous
  • anonymous
wow, your an amazing writer!
anonymous
  • anonymous
The poem is wonderful, though the smoke line falls out of the rhythm of the poem.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thank you<3 I'll look into changing it.
anonymous
  • anonymous
great poem. but man you must be upsessed with frodo diggins.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Yes. Yes a I am. *Baggins
anonymous
  • anonymous
you are so talented <3
anonymous
  • anonymous
Wow, thank you<3 You guys are so sweet.
anonymous
  • anonymous
nice job :) @ShotGunGirl
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thank you so much. I'm glad you all like it so much.
anonymous
  • anonymous
I'm going to reopen this question in a new questions.
anonymous
  • anonymous
kk be sure to close this one
anonymous
  • anonymous
I will.

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