your first and third points are strong
Okay thank you. Yeah I wasnt sure on the second one but to replace it could I say that country that cannot police itself has no right to police another?
I was thinking how the world view America because of its foreign policy
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so you dont think these are strong enough? 1. Learn to police yourself before you police others 2. Debt is a problem 3. And troops are dying for wars not their own
As you write you essay , you will realized that 2, 3 will include 1
okay i see so what would another point be?
and this needs to be a speech which I guess is like a essay, no it is sorry I just really want to do good on this
I would recommend using my point; I will give you stuff to support that points
Okay because I do not know how to really elaborate on that one
well, a lot of country in the world see United States negatively because of its interventionist policy
Okay and so I would elborate off of that?
Normally I need two subpoints so what would be another point about the foreign policy?
talk about how its ranking has been going down because of its policy
Okay thank you!(:
another points if you don't like this one would be we got many deep problem here at home like poverty, health, education that we need to focus on instead of on other countries' affair
Okay I can use that statement in my conclusion.
What do you have for an attention grabber? How about Doesn't it seem like america is like that pesky old lady that lives next door thats always in everyone's business?...just a thought