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Manana
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Hi I Wrote An Essay and Turned It In to my teacher and He Gave Me This Feed Back. "Revisit this and touch it up. Where's a proper title? You bring up a lot of great stats but generalize them all. Striking increase in divorce rate... what's the rate? Why is it striking? There are tons of examples of this through the essay. Give more detail."
Can Someone Explain To Me What He Means and Maybe Check Over My Essay? If I Post It.
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Manana Group Title
Hi I Wrote An Essay and Turned It In to my teacher and He Gave Me This Feed Back. "Revisit this and touch it up. Where's a proper title? You bring up a lot of great stats but generalize them all. Striking increase in divorce rate... what's the rate? Why is it striking? There are tons of examples of this through the essay. Give more detail." Can Someone Explain To Me What He Means and Maybe Check Over My Essay? If I Post It.
 one year ago
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gemstonegirl Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1
i'll be right on it when u do :)
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gemstonegirl Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1
Well for one I agree with u’re teacher that there’s are good stats but I think what he needs u to o is to prove this examples u have given for instance when u say there has been a striking increase in divorce rates then u should show how it has changed over time
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gemstonegirl Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1
tell me if this makes sense b4 i go on
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gemstonegirl Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1
i think u need to use like percentages to show figure stats to be clear and reinforce ure argument
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gemstonegirl Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1
Ure argument needs to be stated in the intro as well cause that way the reader understands what ure getting at…
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godorovg Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1
first off you remember who you are writing for? second you need to more clearer in what you are saying and not just stats and tell why they are inport to know.
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godorovg Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1
let me ask what type of paper is this?
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Manana Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0
Cause and Effect
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godorovg Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1
okay.. think about causes of this issue? expaand and write them out. Next put what effect it has on kids, friends and so on..
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godorovg Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1
Also in your opening also must show this same thing.
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godorovg Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1
also trans in your eassy so people know when you are switching back and forth
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Manana Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0
Thanks :) this help alot!
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