anonymous
  • anonymous
For my English III class, I just need one more line to complete my poem and I need help with it. Here's my poem listed below :)
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anonymous
  • anonymous
I am an American who cannot wait for the elections to come and wonder how long our nation will survive. I wonder which two of the candidate will be president starting this November. I hear a lot of controversy over the upcoming election. I see a bunch of commercials about Obama and Romney. I want the better of the two to be president. I am an American who cannot wait for the elections to come. I pretend that everything is going to be alright in our nation. I feel that our government is not helping our nation advance and get better. I touch (an imaginary touch) I worry when our nation constantly spends money as if there was no limit. I cry when I think about our country going to collapse. I am an American who cannot wait for the elections to come and wonder how long our nation will survive. I understand that everything our nation does will not be good in the long run. I say that our country is slowly drifting away. I dream that America will someday be as great as it was years ago. I try my best to do anything I can for America. I hope that America will survive and not crumble. I am an American who cannot wait for the elections to come and wonder how long our nation will survive.
anonymous
  • anonymous
The only line I need help with is the- I touch (an imaginary touch)
lgbasallote
  • lgbasallote
what kind of help do you need?

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anonymous
  • anonymous
I can't think of anything that would follow "I touch (an imaginary touch" that would match the poem, can't think of anything.
lgbasallote
  • lgbasallote
wait..you're looking for a line/s between I touch (an imaginary touch) I worry when our nation constantly spends money as if there was no limit. ?
anonymous
  • anonymous
K so my poem is an "I Am Poem" and there are certain guidelines for each line. My line that I need help has to do something about touching, and it's going to be above the "I worry when our nation constantly spends money as if there was no limit."
lgbasallote
  • lgbasallote
....so is I touch (an imaginary touch) supposed to be in the poem or not?
anonymous
  • anonymous
Heress an example from another poem: I touch the sky, the stars, the moon, and all the planets as representatives of mankind. Perhaps you could do something similar..
anonymous
  • anonymous
No, that's just what I'm supposed to write about. I'm suppose to make a line that has to deal with touching something that relates to the poem.
anonymous
  • anonymous
*Here's
lgbasallote
  • lgbasallote
"Every day, politicians kill the nation with their touch of death" does that work?
lgbasallote
  • lgbasallote
or maybe "Every day, politicians kill the nation slowly with their touch of death" i think that sounds nicer
anonymous
  • anonymous
Wow that' nice, but sadly my line has to start out w/ "I touch.. then say something"
karatechopper
  • karatechopper
Uhm... I am an American.
lgbasallote
  • lgbasallote
hmm okay...i think of something else
anonymous
  • anonymous
KC that's the topic my teacher gave us. we all had to start like that.
lgbasallote
  • lgbasallote
"I touch something, and the government takes it away from me" How about that?
karatechopper
  • karatechopper
Lou. Do this. I know u have that line I am an American and all that at the beginning with that extra line on it. Which is fine. but lemme show u this...
lgbasallote
  • lgbasallote
...although does that count as imaginary touch? it's a metaphor....so does it count as imaginary?
karatechopper
  • karatechopper
I AM AN AMERICAN. I am an American who cannot wait for the elections to come and wonder how long our nation will survive. I wonder which two of the candidate will be president starting this November. I hear a lot of controversy over the upcoming election. I see a bunch of commercials about Obama and Romney. I want the better of the two to be president. I am an American who cannot wait for the elections to come. I pretend that everything is going to be alright in our nation. I feel that our government is not helping our nation advance and get better. I touch (an imaginary touch) I worry when our nation constantly spends money as if there was no limit. I cry when I think about our country going to collapse. I am an American who cannot wait for the elections to come and wonder how long our nation will survive. I understand that everything our nation does will not be good in the long run. I say that our country is slowly drifting away. I dream that America will someday be as great as it was years ago. I try my best to do anything I can for America. I hope that America will survive and not crumble. I am an American who cannot wait for the elections to come and wonder how long our nation will survive. I AM AN AMERICAN, and i love my country. Well i just tagged the love country part in. but i was gonna say start with I am an american and end with it
anonymous
  • anonymous
I touch a nation where, politicians slowly drown their own nation with words and promises thrown into thin air. Hm i don't think this makes sense...
lgbasallote
  • lgbasallote
@karatechopper @Loujoelou said that he was supposed to follow a format though
karatechopper
  • karatechopper
Are you ending this? or continuing on?
anonymous
  • anonymous
I have to follow a format and lgba I like those lines.
karatechopper
  • karatechopper
But he said he had to have an "I am" at the end right? so...like. tell me what the main story you are telling about this poem. I know you are american. But is this on the government?
karatechopper
  • karatechopper
Ok sorry guys i have to go get ready for school!! Good luck Lou! and bye everyone!
anonymous
  • anonymous
It's okay thx for trying KC :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
Jazy I like that line, maybe if we can edit it a little, I can use it? :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
Of course!! sorry I had a cluster of thoughts...:)
anonymous
  • anonymous
no prob. :) It's just I have to go in school like in 5 minutes as well and yeah. :)
lgbasallote
  • lgbasallote
maybe a revision can be "I touch a nation where, politicians slowly drown their own nation with words and unfulfilled promises" or something like that
anonymous
  • anonymous
^^That"s nicer :)
lgbasallote
  • lgbasallote
although would be nice if it was fanceir...that sounds plain lol
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thx a ton both of you!! :) Gonna use this line and lgba it doesn't matter to me :)
lgbasallote
  • lgbasallote
how about "I touch a nation where, politicians slowly drown their own nation with words and promises marked on sand" figures of speech are better =))
lgbasallote
  • lgbasallote
it still has same syllabication
anonymous
  • anonymous
Your welcome :) And @lgbasallote you have a lot of ideas in every subject! I gotta work on my courses now:) bye!
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thx to you both, and now I g2g :)

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