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HELP: (indent and edit) After these long, gruesome years I met someone I could trust and talk to Pip. He was in front of my house walking by with a little boy. I ran to him and asked him if he remembered me. He said, “Yes, Estella, nice to meet you after such a long time.” Do you wish to walk with us?” I said, “Okay.” There was a long period of silence. I looked at his face; he looked like the same Pip I had left – just with a couple of gray hairs. Mostly I have noticed how there was no happiness in his eyes. I asked him if the child was his son. “No, this is Joe and Biddy’s son. I never got married.” His reply

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  1. AdhaZeera
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    caused all the guilt to rush back to me. He added, “So I’ve heard you’ve gotten married again after Drummle died. How has it been going?” I replied, “You probably haven’t heard, but I came back here because he passed away a week ago.” He looked at me and said “Oh, I’m sorry.” At that moment I could feel all of my emotions about to rush out of my eyes. I think Pip could tell. He opened his arms wide and I came in for a hug. I started sobbing. I couldn’t last remember when I had felt like this before. My behavior probably raised questions in Pip’s mind, because the next thing he asked me was if my last relationship was fine or not. I explained to him that the doctor had married me to protect me from the things society would tell a widow – not out of love. While trying to tell Pip about all of my mixed emotions, I accidently sputtered out how much I miss him and I’d do anything to have him back. After I realized what I had said, I looked down and slowly whispered sorry. However, his reply was, “I want you back too.” I didn’t know what to say. I hugged Pip and his nephew, Junior Pip. He whispered, “We’ll make this work out.” Pip and I walked over to a nearby coffee shop. On the way, we dropped Junior Pip off at home with Biddy. Pip and I planned out how we would make this work out. We decided to go home that night and he was to talk about it with Biddy and Joe. He called me at 11:30PM confirming that Joe and Biddy has agreed with our decision. Pip and I met each other again the next morning. He had a new glow of happiness to his face. I felt glad seeing him happy after such a long time. We talked about doing a small marriage with his family and a couple of our friends present. I agreed. After I was about to leave, he called my name and looked back. He had a small box and he told me to open it. I opened it and inside was a beautiful diamond ring. He took it out of the box and put it on me. It fit perfectly! My eyes filled up with tears of happiness. I gave him a hug and knew that life had given me a second chance at love, and this time I would cherish every second of it.

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    @bngaure Please help..

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    ok give me a minute

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    Ok excuse the spacing if it looks a little off, I wasn't using Word I used notepad. After these long, gruesome years I met someone I could trust and talk to. His name was/is (you can use either) Pip. He was walking in front of my house with a little boy. I ran to him and asked him if he remembered me. He said, “Yes, Estella, nice to meet you after such a long time. Do you wish to walk with us?” [ that I would actually change to nice to see you ] “Okay.” I replied but as we walked there was a long period of silence. I looked at his face; he looked like the same Pip I had left – just with a couple of gray hairs. I have noticed how there was no happiness in his eyes. I asked him if the child was his son. “No, this is Joe and Biddy’s son. I never got married.” Instantly with his reply all the guilt just rushed over me. He added, “So I’ve heard you’ve gotten married again after Drummle died." (with the next line I think im missing something) "How has it been going?” I replied, “You probably haven’t heard, but I came back here because he passed away a week ago.” He looked at me and said “Oh, I’m sorry.” At that moment my emotions nearly poured out of my eyes. I think Pip could tell. He opened his arms wide and I came in for a hug. I started sobbing. I couldn’t last remember when I had felt like this before. My behavior probably raised questions in Pip’s mind, because the next thing he asked me was if my last relationship was fine or not. I explained to him that the doctor had married me to protect me from the things society would tell a widow – not out of love. While trying to tell Pip about all of my mixed emotions, I accidently sputtered out how much I miss him and I’d do anything to have him back. After I realized what I had said, I looked down and slowly whispered sorry. However, his reply was, “I want you back too.” I didn’t know what to say. I hugged Pip and his nephew, Junior Pip. He whispered, “We’ll make this work out.” Pip and I walked over to a nearby coffee shop. On the way, we dropped Junior Pip off at home with Biddy. Pip and I planned out how we would make this work out. We decided to go home that night and he was to talk about it with Biddy and Joe. He called me at 11:30PM confirming that Joe and Biddy has agreed with our decision. Pip and I met each other again the next morning. He had a new glow of happiness to his face. I was glad to see him happy after such a long time. We talked about having a small wedding with his family and a couple of our friends present. After I was about to leave, he called my name and looked back. He had a small box and he told me to open it. I opened it and inside was a beautiful diamond ring. He took it out of the box and put it on me. It fit perfectly! I cried tears of happiness. We hugged and I knew that life had given me a second chance at love, and this time I would cherish every second of it.

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    I started, but I believe you have some good help. HELP: (indent and edit) After these long gruesome years, I met Pip, someone I could trust and talk to. He was walking with a little boy in front of my house. I ran to him and asked him if he remembered me. He said, “Yes, Estella, nice to meet you after such a long time.” Do you wish to walk with us?” I said, “Okay.” There was a long period of silence. I looked at his face; he looked like the same Pip I had left – just with a couple of gray hairs. Mostly I have noticed how there was no happiness in his eyes. I asked him if the child was his son. “No, this is Joe and Biddy’s son. I never got married.” His reply caused all the guilt to rush back to me. He added, “So I’ve heard you’ve gotten married again after Drummle died. How has it been going?” I replied, “You probably haven’t heard, but I came back here because he passed away a week ago.” He looked at me and said “Oh, I’m sorry.” At that moment I could feel all of my emotions about to rush out of my eyes. I think Pip could tell. He opened his arms wide and I came in for a hug. I started sobbing. I couldn’t last remember when I had felt like this before. My behavior probably raised questions in Pip’s mind, because the next thing he asked me was if my last relationship was fine or not. I explained to him that the doctor had married me to protect me from the things society would tell a widow – not out of love. While trying to tell Pip about all of my mixed emotions, I accidently sputtered out how much I miss him and I’d do anything to have him back. After I realized what I had said, I looked down and slowly whispered sorry. However, his reply was, “I want you back too.” I didn’t know what to say. I hugged Pip and his nephew, Junior Pip. He whispered, “We’ll make this work out.” Pip and I walked over to a nearby coffee shop. On the way, we dropped Junior Pip off at home with Biddy. Pip and I planned out how we would make this work out. We decided to go home that night and he was to talk about it with Biddy and Joe. He called me at 11:30PM confirming that Joe and Biddy has agreed with our decision. Pip and I met each other again the next morning. He had a new glow of happiness to his face. I felt glad seeing him happy after such a long time. We talked about doing a small marriage with his family and a couple of our friends present. I agreed. After I was about to leave, he called my name and looked back. He had a small box and he told me to open it. I opened it and inside was a beautiful diamond ring. He took it out of the box and put it on me. It fit perfectly! My eyes filled up with tears of happiness. I gave him a hug and knew that life had given me a second chance at love, and this time I would cherish every second of it.

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    remember you indent during dialogue (: aside from that you are good to go.

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    Here is the rest, but I am not a writer and bngaure seems to be a good one. After these long gruesome years, I met Pip, someone I could trust and talk to. He was walking with a little boy in front of my house. I ran to him and asked him if he remembered me. He said, “Yes, Estella, nice to see you after such a long time.” Do you wish to walk with us?” I said, “Okay.” There was a long period of silence. I looked at his face; he looked like the same Pip I had left – just with a couple of gray hairs. I noticed there was no happiness in his eyes. I asked him if the child was his son. “No, this is Joe and Biddy’s son. I never got married.” The guilt rushed back to me. He added, “So I’ve heard you’ve gotten married again after Drummle died. How has it been going?” I replied, “You probably haven’t heard, but I came back here because he passed away a week ago.” He looked at me and said “Oh, I’m sorry.” At that moment I could feel all of my emotions about to rush out of my eyes. I think Pip could tell. He opened his arms wide and I came in for a hug. I started sobbing. I couldn’t last remember when I had felt like this before. My behavior probably raised questions in Pip’s mind, because the next thing he asked me was, if my last relationship was fine. I explained to him that the doctor had married me to protect me from the things society would tell a widow – not out of love. While trying to tell Pip about all of my mixed emotions, I accidently sputtered out how much I miss him and I’d do anything to have him back. After I realized what I had said, I looked down and slowly whispered sorry. However, his reply was, “I want you back too.” I didn’t know what to say. I hugged Pip and his nephew, Junior Pip. He whispered, “We’ll make this work out.” Pip and I walked over to a nearby coffee shop. On the way, we dropped Junior Pip off at home with Biddy. Pip and I planned out how we would make this work out. We decided to go home that night and he was to talk about it with Biddy and Joe. He called me at 11:30PM confirming that Joe and Biddy has agreed with our decision. Pip and I met each other again the next morning. He had a new glow of happiness to his face. I felt glad seeing him happy after such a long time. We talked about doing a small marriage with his family and a couple of our friends present. I agreed. After I was about to leave, he called my name and looked back. He had a small box and he told me to open it. I opened it and inside was a beautiful diamond ring. He took it out of the box and put it on me. It fit perfectly! My eyes filled up with tears of happiness. I gave him a hug and knew that life had given me a second chance at love, and this time I would cherish every second of it.

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