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KnitWit

  • 3 years ago

If anyone could look at my song-in progress, that'd be great: I just can’t hurt you But I don’t know what to do I can’t say the words What would I do afterwards? But then you lost trust And I had to adjust You left in a fit of rage As if placing me in a cage I know I should leave behind All these thoughts in my mind And these feelings in my heart But I don’t know how to start… But I’m finding it impossible I just am not able To forget

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  1. kymber
    • 3 years ago
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    Didn't involve enough spaghetti.

  2. countonme123
    • 3 years ago
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    let's hear how it sounds then we can tell you what to fix

  3. kymber
    • 3 years ago
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    Suggestion: "I know I should leave behind All \(\it{this\ spaghetti}\) in my mind"

  4. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    ?? I can't fully figure out the melody and I need to work on my voice before I sing it. Plus I have a cold now.

  5. bri18
    • 3 years ago
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    i liked it(:

  6. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    Please, kymber...

  7. kymber
    • 3 years ago
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    Another suggestion: "You left in a fit of rage As if placing me in a cage \(\it{filled\ with\ spaghetti}\)"

  8. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    Thanks, Bri. This is about something that just happened, like a bit ago in my life, so... it's not just by someone who knows nothing about the experiences in the song...

  9. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    Kymber, if you don't have a real suggestion that makes sense, please get out of my question!!!

  10. kymber
    • 3 years ago
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    These are nice lyrics, but if you added some spaghetti, it would be perfect :)

  11. kymber
    • 3 years ago
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    :| My suggestions make perfect sense. No need to be rude.

  12. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    PLEASE!!!

  13. countonme123
    • 3 years ago
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    spaghetti does sound good right now

  14. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    I'm sorry. I didn't mean it that way. I just meant it doesn't go with the meter of the song...

  15. countonme123
    • 3 years ago
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    true dat

  16. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    PLEASE! NO MORE SPAGHETTI TALK!!!

  17. kymber
    • 3 years ago
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    You could just ignore my suggestions, then :| Oh and, did you know there's a music group? You could post this song there, too. http://openstudy.com/study#/groups/Music

  18. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    Oh? Thanks for THAT suggestion!

  19. kymber
    • 3 years ago
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    \(\Huge\ddot\smile\)

  20. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    How did you do that?

  21. kymber
    • 3 years ago
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    It's \(\LaTeX\).

  22. kymber
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    It's \ddot\smile

  23. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    Ok...

  24. Agent_Sniffles
    • 3 years ago
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    I agree with Kymber.

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