## KnitWit Group Title If anyone could look at my song-in progress, that'd be great: I just can’t hurt you But I don’t know what to do I can’t say the words What would I do afterwards? But then you lost trust And I had to adjust You left in a fit of rage As if placing me in a cage I know I should leave behind All these thoughts in my mind And these feelings in my heart But I don’t know how to start… But I’m finding it impossible I just am not able To forget one year ago one year ago

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1. kymber Group Title

Didn't involve enough spaghetti.

2. countonme123 Group Title

let's hear how it sounds then we can tell you what to fix

3. kymber Group Title

Suggestion: "I know I should leave behind All $$\it{this\ spaghetti}$$ in my mind"

4. KnitWit Group Title

?? I can't fully figure out the melody and I need to work on my voice before I sing it. Plus I have a cold now.

5. bri18 Group Title

i liked it(:

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7. kymber Group Title

Another suggestion: "You left in a fit of rage As if placing me in a cage $$\it{filled\ with\ spaghetti}$$"

8. KnitWit Group Title

Thanks, Bri. This is about something that just happened, like a bit ago in my life, so... it's not just by someone who knows nothing about the experiences in the song...

9. KnitWit Group Title

Kymber, if you don't have a real suggestion that makes sense, please get out of my question!!!

10. kymber Group Title

These are nice lyrics, but if you added some spaghetti, it would be perfect :)

11. kymber Group Title

:| My suggestions make perfect sense. No need to be rude.

12. KnitWit Group Title

13. countonme123 Group Title

spaghetti does sound good right now

14. KnitWit Group Title

I'm sorry. I didn't mean it that way. I just meant it doesn't go with the meter of the song...

15. countonme123 Group Title

true dat

16. KnitWit Group Title

PLEASE! NO MORE SPAGHETTI TALK!!!

17. kymber Group Title

You could just ignore my suggestions, then :| Oh and, did you know there's a music group? You could post this song there, too. http://openstudy.com/study#/groups/Music

18. KnitWit Group Title

Oh? Thanks for THAT suggestion!

19. kymber Group Title

$$\Huge\ddot\smile$$

20. KnitWit Group Title

How did you do that?

21. kymber Group Title

It's $$\LaTeX$$.

22. kymber Group Title

It's \ddot\smile

23. KnitWit Group Title

Ok...

24. Agent_Sniffles Group Title

I agree with Kymber.