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anonymous
 3 years ago
If anyone could look at my songin progress, that'd be great:
I just can’t hurt you
But I don’t know what to do
I can’t say the words
What would I do afterwards?
But then you lost trust
And I had to adjust
You left in a fit of rage
As if placing me in a cage
I know I should leave behind
All these thoughts in my mind
And these feelings in my heart
But I don’t know how to start…
But I’m finding it impossible
I just am not able
To forget
anonymous
 3 years ago
If anyone could look at my songin progress, that'd be great: I just can’t hurt you But I don’t know what to do I can’t say the words What would I do afterwards? But then you lost trust And I had to adjust You left in a fit of rage As if placing me in a cage I know I should leave behind All these thoughts in my mind And these feelings in my heart But I don’t know how to start… But I’m finding it impossible I just am not able To forget

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kymber
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2Didn't involve enough spaghetti.

anonymous
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0let's hear how it sounds then we can tell you what to fix

kymber
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2Suggestion: "I know I should leave behind All \(\it{this\ spaghetti}\) in my mind"

anonymous
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0?? I can't fully figure out the melody and I need to work on my voice before I sing it. Plus I have a cold now.

kymber
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2Another suggestion: "You left in a fit of rage As if placing me in a cage \(\it{filled\ with\ spaghetti}\)"

anonymous
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Thanks, Bri. This is about something that just happened, like a bit ago in my life, so... it's not just by someone who knows nothing about the experiences in the song...

anonymous
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Kymber, if you don't have a real suggestion that makes sense, please get out of my question!!!

kymber
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2These are nice lyrics, but if you added some spaghetti, it would be perfect :)

kymber
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2: My suggestions make perfect sense. No need to be rude.

anonymous
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0spaghetti does sound good right now

anonymous
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I'm sorry. I didn't mean it that way. I just meant it doesn't go with the meter of the song...

anonymous
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0PLEASE! NO MORE SPAGHETTI TALK!!!

kymber
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2You could just ignore my suggestions, then : Oh and, did you know there's a music group? You could post this song there, too. http://openstudy.com/study#/groups/Music

anonymous
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Oh? Thanks for THAT suggestion!
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