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anonymous
 4 years ago
If anyone could look at my songin progress, that'd be great:
I just can’t hurt you
But I don’t know what to do
I can’t say the words
What would I do afterwards?
But then you lost trust
And I had to adjust
You left in a fit of rage
As if placing me in a cage
I know I should leave behind
All these thoughts in my mind
And these feelings in my heart
But I don’t know how to start…
But I’m finding it impossible
Yeah, I'm finding it impossible
I just am not able
I'm sadly unable
To forget
anonymous
 4 years ago
If anyone could look at my songin progress, that'd be great: I just can’t hurt you But I don’t know what to do I can’t say the words What would I do afterwards? But then you lost trust And I had to adjust You left in a fit of rage As if placing me in a cage I know I should leave behind All these thoughts in my mind And these feelings in my heart But I don’t know how to start… But I’m finding it impossible Yeah, I'm finding it impossible I just am not able I'm sadly unable To forget

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kymber
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1You can edit questions, you know. :P

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Just remember, a cold greatly changes the quality of my voice, I need to work on my voice, and I have a bad quality microphone. This is just to give people who look at this an idea...

kymber
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1You need to enclose it in \(

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i like it it would sound cool with a piano instrumental behind it

kymber
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1\(\Huge\ddot\smile\) \(\Huge\mathsf{Yay!}\)

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I play piano, @bngaure !

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0But my voice isn't too good, even under normal circumstances. I also play guitar. Which do you think would sound better?

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Did you listen to the mp3s, @bngaure

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0your voice sounds fine to mee with music behind it it will sound even better.

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Thanks. You're not just saying that ?

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I'm a very low alto though. Most people don;t like that at all for a girl... They only like sopranos...

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0no haha i actually prefer deeper voices. um take etta james for example her voice is even deeper then yours oh and adele shes not a soprano either.

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Ok. Thanls. But you're not just saying mine is good as a complinment?

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I can't type today...

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0that was a fail in my opinion. almost the whole song you are like aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Ok. First of all, look at the comment. "Just remember, a cold greatly changes the quality of my voice, I need to work on my voice, and I have a bad quality microphone. This is just to give people who look at this an idea..."

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Kymber, PLEASE don't agree with him!!!

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0ok ok well you indeed need to pass that cold, then you need a good beat, and after that you will have a great song! PS : and a better mic

kymber
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1I can't listen to it now, I'm at school :

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I don't have the MONEY for a better mic!!! And, yes, I KNOW my voice needs work.

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Ok. Well, I'm just glad you didn't agree with him...

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@bngaure : You're not just SAYING I'm good?

kymber
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1Also, I just want to say that when you post things like this on the internet, expect negative feedback.

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0no im not just saying that i only lie if it will benefit me, i think that with an instrumental behind it your gonna have yourself a good song

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I know, but not totally neg, but just say ONE thing you loked, or say a way to fix it along with the negatives...

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Thanks. I just went through a lot, so I wrote this to help, and to make a song others will like.

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@kymber is right, not everyone is gonna give positive feedback. My opinion is that your voice IS a bit hard to hear. However the song lyrics are really good, and maybe with some backround music or a beat...you never know ^_^

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0get a catchy beat or tune.... you NEED it. but honestly how can you expect your song to be great with a mic like that. you wanna sound crystal clear.

kymber
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1Well, KnitWit, he did say a way to fix it and you weren't very appreciative.

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Thanks! I wasn't expecting fully positive, just a bit of gold with the rocks, so to speak. @kymber But not in the same comment. That's what I hoped for, constructive crit, but in the same thing, a way to fix it, or a part that they liked...

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i like.....................the words ^_^

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0But not my voice... I'm trying...

kymber
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1The words are okay.. but could use some spaghetti. "I just can’t hurt you But I don’t know what to do \(\it{with\ all\ this\ spaghetti\ flowing\ out\ of\ my\ pockets}\)."

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0You said that similarly in the other question...

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i honestly hope you clear up your voice, add a good beat, and make a bajillion dollars on a great new song :)

kymber
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1"I just am not able I'm sadly unable To \(\it{staunch\ the\ flow\ of\ spaghetti\ from\ my\ pockets}\)."

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Thanks! I know, my voice needs work, but I'm trying, my dad's helping, and I'm pianoing... oh wait, that ing doesn't work...

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I don'r have the money for a new mic, and this is just a trial thing...

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0to try out the song, etc...

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i enjoyed the lyrics of your song. keep working on your voice(:

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Thanks! You saw the wmas?

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I've got to go. Be back on Monday.

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0\[\Huge\ddot\smile \]

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i like it a lot! great job!

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0it's really good! you're very talented x

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Great Job! Cingratulations! Do you mind if I refer you to a talent agency my friend works for? I think you have some serious talent! Test Taking Lifesaver

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Test Taking Lifesaver there's a reason your friend works for the talent agency and not you

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Dear kjhgfd, Your Right! I work for google! Im better off! Thanks for that!

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@TestTakingLifesaver haha good one

anonymous
 4 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0its f'in dope kid ;D beautiful keep adit
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