If anyone could look at my song-in progress, that'd be great: I just can’t hurt you But I don’t know what to do I can’t say the words What would I do afterwards? But then you lost trust And I had to adjust You left in a fit of rage As if placing me in a cage I know I should leave behind All these thoughts in my mind And these feelings in my heart But I don’t know how to start… But I’m finding it impossible Yeah, I'm finding it impossible I just am not able I'm sadly unable To forget

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If anyone could look at my song-in progress, that'd be great: I just can’t hurt you But I don’t know what to do I can’t say the words What would I do afterwards? But then you lost trust And I had to adjust You left in a fit of rage As if placing me in a cage I know I should leave behind All these thoughts in my mind And these feelings in my heart But I don’t know how to start… But I’m finding it impossible Yeah, I'm finding it impossible I just am not able I'm sadly unable To forget

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Just remember, a cold greatly changes the quality of my voice, I need to work on my voice, and I have a bad quality microphone. This is just to give people who look at this an idea...
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You need to enclose it in \(
and \)
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i like it it would sound cool with a piano instrumental behind it
It's \ddot\smile
\(\ddot\smile\)
GOT IT!
\(\Huge\ddot\smile\) \(\Huge\mathsf{Yay!}\)
I play piano, @bngaure !
But my voice isn't too good, even under normal circumstances. I also play guitar. Which do you think would sound better?
Did you listen to the mp3s, @bngaure
your voice sounds fine to mee with music behind it it will sound even better.
Thanks. You're not just saying that ?
I'm a very low alto though. Most people don;t like that at all for a girl... They only like sopranos...
no haha i actually prefer deeper voices. um take etta james for example her voice is even deeper then yours oh and adele shes not a soprano either.
Ok. Thanls. But you're not just saying mine is good as a complinment?
I can't type today...
that was a fail in my opinion. almost the whole song you are like aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ok. First of all, look at the comment. "Just remember, a cold greatly changes the quality of my voice, I need to work on my voice, and I have a bad quality microphone. This is just to give people who look at this an idea..."
Kymber, PLEASE don't agree with him!!!
ok ok well you indeed need to pass that cold, then you need a good beat, and after that you will have a great song! PS : and a better mic
I can't listen to it now, I'm at school :|
I don't have the MONEY for a better mic!!! And, yes, I KNOW my voice needs work.
Ok. Well, I'm just glad you didn't agree with him...
@bngaure : You're not just SAYING I'm good?
Also, I just want to say that when you post things like this on the internet, expect negative feedback.
true dat
no im not just saying that i only lie if it will benefit me, i think that with an instrumental behind it your gonna have yourself a good song
I know, but not totally neg, but just say ONE thing you loked, or say a way to fix it along with the negatives...
Thanks. I just went through a lot, so I wrote this to help, and to make a song others will like.
@kymber is right, not everyone is gonna give positive feedback. My opinion is that your voice IS a bit hard to hear. However the song lyrics are really good, and maybe with some backround music or a beat...you never know ^_^
get a catchy beat or tune.... you NEED it. but honestly how can you expect your song to be great with a mic like that. you wanna sound crystal clear.
Well, KnitWit, he did say a way to fix it and you weren't very appreciative.
Thanks! I wasn't expecting fully positive, just a bit of gold with the rocks, so to speak. @kymber But not in the same comment. That's what I hoped for, constructive crit, but in the same thing, a way to fix it, or a part that they liked...
i like.....................the words ^_^
Thanks!
But not my voice... I'm trying...
The words are okay.. but could use some spaghetti. "I just can’t hurt you But I don’t know what to do \(\it{with\ all\ this\ spaghetti\ flowing\ out\ of\ my\ pockets}\)."
You said that similarly in the other question...
i honestly hope you clear up your voice, add a good beat, and make a bajillion dollars on a great new song :)
"I just am not able I'm sadly unable To \(\it{staunch\ the\ flow\ of\ spaghetti\ from\ my\ pockets}\)."
Thanks! I know, my voice needs work, but I'm trying, my dad's helping, and I'm pianoing... oh wait, that ing doesn't work...
I don'r have the money for a new mic, and this is just a trial thing...
to try out the song, etc...
i enjoyed the lyrics of your song. keep working on your voice(:
Thanks! You saw the wmas?
Oh wait, you didn't.
I've got to go. Be back on Monday.
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i like it a lot! great job!
it's really good! you're very talented x
Great Job! Cingratulations! Do you mind if I refer you to a talent agency my friend works for? I think you have some serious talent! Test Taking Lifesaver
Test Taking Lifesaver there's a reason your friend works for the talent agency and not you
Dear kjhgfd, Your Right! I work for google! Im better off! Thanks for that!
@TestTakingLifesaver haha good one
Thanks!
its f'in dope kid ;D beautiful keep adit

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