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KnitWit

  • 3 years ago

If anyone could look at my song-in progress, that'd be great: I just can’t hurt you But I don’t know what to do I can’t say the words What would I do afterwards? But then you lost trust And I had to adjust You left in a fit of rage As if placing me in a cage I know I should leave behind All these thoughts in my mind And these feelings in my heart But I don’t know how to start… But I’m finding it impossible Yeah, I'm finding it impossible I just am not able I'm sadly unable To forget

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  1. kymber
    • 3 years ago
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    You can edit questions, you know. :P

  2. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    Oh....

  3. kymber
    • 3 years ago
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    \(\Huge\ddot\smile\)

  4. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    Just remember, a cold greatly changes the quality of my voice, I need to work on my voice, and I have a bad quality microphone. This is just to give people who look at this an idea...

  5. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    ddot/smile

  6. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    ddotsmile

  7. KnitWit
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    d dot smile

  8. kymber
    • 3 years ago
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    You need to enclose it in \(

  9. kymber
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    and \)

  10. KnitWit
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    \(ddot/smile\)

  11. bngaure
    • 3 years ago
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    i like it it would sound cool with a piano instrumental behind it

  12. kymber
    • 3 years ago
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    It's \ddot\smile

  13. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    \(\ddot\smile\)

  14. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    GOT IT!

  15. kymber
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    \(\Huge\ddot\smile\) \(\Huge\mathsf{Yay!}\)

  16. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    I play piano, @bngaure !

  17. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    But my voice isn't too good, even under normal circumstances. I also play guitar. Which do you think would sound better?

  18. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    Did you listen to the mp3s, @bngaure

  19. bngaure
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    your voice sounds fine to mee with music behind it it will sound even better.

  20. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    Thanks. You're not just saying that ?

  21. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    I'm a very low alto though. Most people don;t like that at all for a girl... They only like sopranos...

  22. bngaure
    • 3 years ago
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    no haha i actually prefer deeper voices. um take etta james for example her voice is even deeper then yours oh and adele shes not a soprano either.

  23. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    Ok. Thanls. But you're not just saying mine is good as a complinment?

  24. KnitWit
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    I can't type today...

  25. countonme123
    • 3 years ago
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    that was a fail in my opinion. almost the whole song you are like aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

  26. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    Ok. First of all, look at the comment. "Just remember, a cold greatly changes the quality of my voice, I need to work on my voice, and I have a bad quality microphone. This is just to give people who look at this an idea..."

  27. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    Kymber, PLEASE don't agree with him!!!

  28. countonme123
    • 3 years ago
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    ok ok well you indeed need to pass that cold, then you need a good beat, and after that you will have a great song! PS : and a better mic

  29. kymber
    • 3 years ago
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    I can't listen to it now, I'm at school :|

  30. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    I don't have the MONEY for a better mic!!! And, yes, I KNOW my voice needs work.

  31. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    Ok. Well, I'm just glad you didn't agree with him...

  32. KnitWit
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    @bngaure : You're not just SAYING I'm good?

  33. kymber
    • 3 years ago
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    Also, I just want to say that when you post things like this on the internet, expect negative feedback.

  34. countonme123
    • 3 years ago
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    true dat

  35. bngaure
    • 3 years ago
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    no im not just saying that i only lie if it will benefit me, i think that with an instrumental behind it your gonna have yourself a good song

  36. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    I know, but not totally neg, but just say ONE thing you loked, or say a way to fix it along with the negatives...

  37. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    Thanks. I just went through a lot, so I wrote this to help, and to make a song others will like.

  38. jazy
    • 3 years ago
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    @kymber is right, not everyone is gonna give positive feedback. My opinion is that your voice IS a bit hard to hear. However the song lyrics are really good, and maybe with some backround music or a beat...you never know ^_^

  39. countonme123
    • 3 years ago
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    get a catchy beat or tune.... you NEED it. but honestly how can you expect your song to be great with a mic like that. you wanna sound crystal clear.

  40. kymber
    • 3 years ago
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    Well, KnitWit, he did say a way to fix it and you weren't very appreciative.

  41. KnitWit
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    Thanks! I wasn't expecting fully positive, just a bit of gold with the rocks, so to speak. @kymber But not in the same comment. That's what I hoped for, constructive crit, but in the same thing, a way to fix it, or a part that they liked...

  42. countonme123
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    i like.....................the words ^_^

  43. KnitWit
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    Thanks!

  44. KnitWit
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    But not my voice... I'm trying...

  45. kymber
    • 3 years ago
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    The words are okay.. but could use some spaghetti. "I just can’t hurt you But I don’t know what to do \(\it{with\ all\ this\ spaghetti\ flowing\ out\ of\ my\ pockets}\)."

  46. KnitWit
    • 3 years ago
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    You said that similarly in the other question...

  47. countonme123
    • 3 years ago
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    i honestly hope you clear up your voice, add a good beat, and make a bajillion dollars on a great new song :)

  48. kymber
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    "I just am not able I'm sadly unable To \(\it{staunch\ the\ flow\ of\ spaghetti\ from\ my\ pockets}\)."

  49. KnitWit
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    Thanks! I know, my voice needs work, but I'm trying, my dad's helping, and I'm pianoing... oh wait, that ing doesn't work...

  50. KnitWit
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    I don'r have the money for a new mic, and this is just a trial thing...

  51. KnitWit
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    to try out the song, etc...

  52. bri18
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    i enjoyed the lyrics of your song. keep working on your voice(:

  53. KnitWit
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    Thanks! You saw the wmas?

  54. KnitWit
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    Oh wait, you didn't.

  55. KnitWit
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    I've got to go. Be back on Monday.

  56. thangeram
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    \[\Huge\ddot\smile \]

  57. Ellyg
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    i like it a lot! great job!

  58. 0-h-darling
    • 3 years ago
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    it's really good! you're very talented x

  59. TestTakingLifesaver
    • 3 years ago
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    Great Job! Cingratulations! Do you mind if I refer you to a talent agency my friend works for? I think you have some serious talent! Test Taking Lifesaver

  60. kjhgfd
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    Test Taking Lifesaver there's a reason your friend works for the talent agency and not you

  61. TestTakingLifesaver
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    Dear kjhgfd, Your Right! I work for google! Im better off! Thanks for that!

  62. countonme123
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    @TestTakingLifesaver haha good one

  63. TestTakingLifesaver
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    Thanks!

  64. dopek.i.d.s
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    its f'in dope kid ;D beautiful keep adit

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