anonymous
  • anonymous
If anyone could look at my song-in progress, that'd be great: I just can’t hurt you But I don’t know what to do I can’t say the words What would I do afterwards? But then you lost trust And I had to adjust You left in a fit of rage As if placing me in a cage I know I should leave behind All these thoughts in my mind And these feelings in my heart But I don’t know how to start… But I’m finding it impossible Yeah, I'm finding it impossible I just am not able I'm sadly unable To forget
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schrodinger
  • schrodinger
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kymber
  • kymber
You can edit questions, you know. :P
anonymous
  • anonymous
Oh....
kymber
  • kymber
\(\Huge\ddot\smile\)

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anonymous
  • anonymous
Just remember, a cold greatly changes the quality of my voice, I need to work on my voice, and I have a bad quality microphone. This is just to give people who look at this an idea...
anonymous
  • anonymous
ddot/smile
anonymous
  • anonymous
ddotsmile
anonymous
  • anonymous
d dot smile
kymber
  • kymber
You need to enclose it in \(
kymber
  • kymber
and \)
anonymous
  • anonymous
\(ddot/smile\)
anonymous
  • anonymous
i like it it would sound cool with a piano instrumental behind it
kymber
  • kymber
It's \ddot\smile
anonymous
  • anonymous
\(\ddot\smile\)
anonymous
  • anonymous
GOT IT!
kymber
  • kymber
\(\Huge\ddot\smile\) \(\Huge\mathsf{Yay!}\)
anonymous
  • anonymous
I play piano, @bngaure !
anonymous
  • anonymous
But my voice isn't too good, even under normal circumstances. I also play guitar. Which do you think would sound better?
anonymous
  • anonymous
Did you listen to the mp3s, @bngaure
anonymous
  • anonymous
your voice sounds fine to mee with music behind it it will sound even better.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thanks. You're not just saying that ?
anonymous
  • anonymous
I'm a very low alto though. Most people don;t like that at all for a girl... They only like sopranos...
anonymous
  • anonymous
no haha i actually prefer deeper voices. um take etta james for example her voice is even deeper then yours oh and adele shes not a soprano either.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Ok. Thanls. But you're not just saying mine is good as a complinment?
anonymous
  • anonymous
I can't type today...
anonymous
  • anonymous
that was a fail in my opinion. almost the whole song you are like aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
anonymous
  • anonymous
Ok. First of all, look at the comment. "Just remember, a cold greatly changes the quality of my voice, I need to work on my voice, and I have a bad quality microphone. This is just to give people who look at this an idea..."
anonymous
  • anonymous
Kymber, PLEASE don't agree with him!!!
anonymous
  • anonymous
ok ok well you indeed need to pass that cold, then you need a good beat, and after that you will have a great song! PS : and a better mic
kymber
  • kymber
I can't listen to it now, I'm at school :|
anonymous
  • anonymous
I don't have the MONEY for a better mic!!! And, yes, I KNOW my voice needs work.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Ok. Well, I'm just glad you didn't agree with him...
anonymous
  • anonymous
@bngaure : You're not just SAYING I'm good?
kymber
  • kymber
Also, I just want to say that when you post things like this on the internet, expect negative feedback.
anonymous
  • anonymous
true dat
anonymous
  • anonymous
no im not just saying that i only lie if it will benefit me, i think that with an instrumental behind it your gonna have yourself a good song
anonymous
  • anonymous
I know, but not totally neg, but just say ONE thing you loked, or say a way to fix it along with the negatives...
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thanks. I just went through a lot, so I wrote this to help, and to make a song others will like.
anonymous
  • anonymous
@kymber is right, not everyone is gonna give positive feedback. My opinion is that your voice IS a bit hard to hear. However the song lyrics are really good, and maybe with some backround music or a beat...you never know ^_^
anonymous
  • anonymous
get a catchy beat or tune.... you NEED it. but honestly how can you expect your song to be great with a mic like that. you wanna sound crystal clear.
kymber
  • kymber
Well, KnitWit, he did say a way to fix it and you weren't very appreciative.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thanks! I wasn't expecting fully positive, just a bit of gold with the rocks, so to speak. @kymber But not in the same comment. That's what I hoped for, constructive crit, but in the same thing, a way to fix it, or a part that they liked...
anonymous
  • anonymous
i like.....................the words ^_^
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thanks!
anonymous
  • anonymous
But not my voice... I'm trying...
kymber
  • kymber
The words are okay.. but could use some spaghetti. "I just can’t hurt you But I don’t know what to do \(\it{with\ all\ this\ spaghetti\ flowing\ out\ of\ my\ pockets}\)."
anonymous
  • anonymous
You said that similarly in the other question...
anonymous
  • anonymous
i honestly hope you clear up your voice, add a good beat, and make a bajillion dollars on a great new song :)
kymber
  • kymber
"I just am not able I'm sadly unable To \(\it{staunch\ the\ flow\ of\ spaghetti\ from\ my\ pockets}\)."
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thanks! I know, my voice needs work, but I'm trying, my dad's helping, and I'm pianoing... oh wait, that ing doesn't work...
anonymous
  • anonymous
I don'r have the money for a new mic, and this is just a trial thing...
anonymous
  • anonymous
to try out the song, etc...
anonymous
  • anonymous
i enjoyed the lyrics of your song. keep working on your voice(:
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thanks! You saw the wmas?
anonymous
  • anonymous
Oh wait, you didn't.
anonymous
  • anonymous
I've got to go. Be back on Monday.
anonymous
  • anonymous
\[\Huge\ddot\smile \]
anonymous
  • anonymous
i like it a lot! great job!
anonymous
  • anonymous
it's really good! you're very talented x
anonymous
  • anonymous
Great Job! Cingratulations! Do you mind if I refer you to a talent agency my friend works for? I think you have some serious talent! Test Taking Lifesaver
anonymous
  • anonymous
Test Taking Lifesaver there's a reason your friend works for the talent agency and not you
anonymous
  • anonymous
Dear kjhgfd, Your Right! I work for google! Im better off! Thanks for that!
anonymous
  • anonymous
@TestTakingLifesaver haha good one
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thanks!
anonymous
  • anonymous
its f'in dope kid ;D beautiful keep adit

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