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katieS.M

  • 2 years ago

Can you help my history essay ? not about info just correct the grammar !!

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  1. lolly
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    if i could see your essay i would help...:)

  2. katieS.M
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    actually.. i didnt finish yet.. but i will post it just so far one !!

  3. katieS.M
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  4. lolly
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    sorry..my computer wont open that file..:(

  5. katieS.M
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  6. katieS.M
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    is that work ?

  7. ElaRose
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    works for mine

  8. lolly
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    that one works for mine!

  9. katieS.M
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    YEAH :))

  10. ElaRose
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    lol

  11. ElaRose
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    yo lolly when your done reading see if you found any mistakes

  12. lolly
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    okey dokey!

  13. lolly
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    yuo should have indented the first paragraph..

  14. lolly
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    oop! you..typo..

  15. lolly
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    and then a period at the end of the 1st paragraph

  16. lolly
    • 2 years ago
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    when you were refering to what Galileo Galilei and the stuff in quotes you need to capitalize : ''Father''

  17. katieS.M
    • 2 years ago
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    oh i c :)

  18. jwheele1
    • 2 years ago
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    Today, i do not have the time to do what i did the other day. but I will look it over for a sec

  19. jwheele1
    • 2 years ago
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    I am also writign a history essay =)

  20. katieS.M
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    cool !!

  21. jwheele1
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    You shoudl compare yours to mine and see what you like and what you dont, what you can improve on, why i changed what I chanegd, etc.

  22. jwheele1
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    I wont be able to do the other paragraphs this time.

  23. jwheele1
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    Before Johannes Gutenberg invented the printing press in 1440, the printing industry was not as vibrant as it would become. People did not have the opportunity to read the various books in the bible due to illiteracy and the availability of books.. The books had previously been copied by hand, so it took a long time to produce a book; in severe cases, it took several years to publish a single book. Because publishing books was a demanding process, and because it was expensive, only the rich could afford books. Due to the fact that books were handwritten, many mistakes were made during the bookmaking process. Therefore, the invention of the printing press created a big boom in the printing industry during the renaissance era because it made books affordable and more accurate, and it also increased literacy and spirituality.

  24. katieS.M
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    cool..

  25. katieS.M
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    Great Great Hehe :)!!

  26. jwheele1
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    intro: 1st sentence shoudl grab your audiences attention and make them WANT to read yoru essay. Thesis should be near the bottom of the paragraph and state what each body paragraph will be about. body paragraph 1: advancement in science and culture-sharing body paragraph 2: advancement in Spirituality body paragraph 3: advancement in literacy and availablity of books Conclusion: You need a conclusion paragraph. it should say the same kind fo things your intro paragraph said but in different words. At teh end of teh paragraph, try to relate it to somethign similar in todays time. For instance, the inventiomn of teh printing press is a lot like todays invention of computers.

  27. katieS.M
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    hmm how can I grab the attention

  28. jwheele1
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    Perhaps, an interesting quote from another source about the invention inf the printing press. example: "For approximately 4,500 years before Gutenberg invented the printing press, books were produced by hand. They were written on surfaces of clay, papyrus, wax, and parchment." source link: http://www.hrc.utexas.edu/educator/modules/gutenberg/books

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