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LilVeroDez13

Can someone help me with my introduction to my personal experience essay? I got some started but need some help.

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  1. iloveboys
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    sure if you can help me, deal? lol

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    Let me see what you need some help with please?

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  3. LilVeroDez13
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    Sure :) Heres the beginning... Have you ever thought about how one moment can change your life? Some may say no and others may say yes. But one moment can really have an impact on you. This is the story of my families friend. Thx

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    What do you need help with?

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    Well first, do you want me to add to that? Or like what happen to your friend, you could go on to say ... "when someone passes (or whatever happened im using that as an example im sorry) you wouldn't think it would hurt so bad, but it changes you so much" ?? --Im not to sure if this is what your question is or not, but im trying let me know if im tottaly off base. lol sorry

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  6. iloveboys
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    I need help with quite a few questions for English 2

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    let me know if i helped at all please sorry if i didn't i will try my best again. I don't really get what your wanting me to do, like add more to your story, give advice, suggestion's???

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    We had gone to float the river in august nd things turned bad.. my familys friend fell in nd the current of the water almost took her life. (should i write about it in the intro or just wait till i get to the body paragraphs?)

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    Alright i will try my hardest to answer ur ?'s

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    Um i would leave what you have already for your intro but add a little bit more cna you re-post it here? just it please?

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    can*

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    Have you ever thought about how one moment can change your life? Some may say no and others may say yes. Some realize that just one second can change everything but others say "live your life to the fullest" in-till that last breath you take, you realize you should of calmed down and not of "lived to the fullest" But one moment can really have an impact on you.

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    maybe something like that? I dont know if you like that, but it may be reallllly good.

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  14. LilVeroDez13
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    I like it (: thanks

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    Your welcome save all the juicy details for the middle paragraphs (3 of them) im guessing, your story sounds intriguing. just to let you know im sure your going to get an amazing grade, it sounds AWESOME. Just one question if you dont mind... s your friend okay>?

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    is your friend okay?*

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    Thanks! Yeahh.. we couldnt find her till an hr later.. it was hard cuz its not like you can take the boat and go backwards. The water dont work that way. We had to climb some rocks to get off nd find her. But shes okk she was just shocked. But she says she wants to go again cuz she doesnt want to live scared of rivers.

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    So what was the ?'s u needed help with

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    YES thats always the way to go, im so proud of your friend for over coming her fears WAAY TO GO~

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    A fitting mnemonic device for the word “deride” would be: roller coaster hair mean laughter horse

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    Deride means to laugh at contempt.. so the answer would b mean laughter :)

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    Identify the misplaced modifier in the following sentence: The team needs to stop at several stores to buy picnic supplies and outdoor games on their way to the beach. The team needs to stop at several stores to buy picnic supplies and outdoor games on their way to the beach.

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    Im not sure about this one. Sorry.

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