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LilVeroDez13 Group Title

I need help with my introduction to my history essay.. thanks.

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  1. LilVeroDez13 Group Title
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    Did you ever think that the values and beliefs of the early English colonists are still alive in America? Geographers say that a civilization will continue to show the values and beliefs of the people who first settled it. As a history detective, you have a chance to find out for yourself if the values and beliefs of the first American colonists are still with us. For your first project, you are to write a five-paragraph essay about certain values and beliefs that you observe in yourself, your family, or your friends. Do you see any of the values and beliefs of the early American colonists?

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    This is wat i got so far... What was life for the northern, middle, and southern colonies? Life was not easy for any of them. They all had there ups and downs. And each with there own values and beliefs. There were sometimes conflict between colonies. And like the northern, middle, and southern colonies, each one of us have our own values and beliefs as well.

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    All of you info is good but it seems to me as if you senteces are too short and its irrelavent because you can put them together and have the best essay

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    I no something that will help you write this essay in 30 minutes. its called TIBC title, intro,body conclusion. in yr theses statement/intro you put 3 things your going to talk about and in your body you are going to have each paragraph 1 of them in the order they are in your thesis/intro.. and the conclusion is just the summ of it all.

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  5. LilVeroDez13 Group Title
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    Thanks!! I know that, thats wat i have to do but dont know wat else to add to the intro

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  6. JazzyPoowh Group Title
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    You could say something like lets a look back in history and explore....... and whatever you want to say after that

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    ok, ill give you an example.. Do yo you like monkeys? did you no monkeys love bananas, they use there feet as their hand, and they swing from trees. you have a paragraph for all three of them. and it should look like that, a question or hook two commas an a and. :D

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    like for you, What was life for the northern, middle, and southern colonies? what did they eat, where did they sleep, and what did they do for work.. thats it.

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  9. LilVeroDez13 Group Title
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    @JazzyPoowh thanks.. i like that. @Japs.. thanks.. do u know anything about the colonies?

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  10. Japs Group Title
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    you don't need a page for a thesis, you need 1-3 sentences that it.

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    nope not at all.

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    yhur welcome @LilVeroDez13 not sayin that yhu shudnt use what anyone else said but i personally like what i came up with

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  13. LilVeroDez13 Group Title
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    @ jazzypoowh ..Yeahh i like what u came up with too

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  14. Japs Group Title
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    well of course you do silly you came up with it. But the way Ive been taught by my teachers.

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    they love the way its easy for them to grade and read.

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  16. JazzyPoowh Group Title
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    lollz @Japs thatz true

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    yup. :D

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  18. Japs Group Title
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    so did you did it?

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    I got this now; Let’s take a look back in history and explore what the values and beliefs of the northern, middle, and southern colonies. They all had their own values and beliefs and in some colonies if you didn’t follow what they told you, you were punished. Some let you believe what you wanted to, without being punished. We are going to learn who they were

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  20. Japs Group Title
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    thats really long.

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    Lets take a look back in history, look at what there values and beliefs are, why some believed what they wanted with out being punished, and the difference between the colonies. ? what about that?

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  22. LilVeroDez13 Group Title
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    Thats good.. but how they gonna know who im talking about.

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    bye the tree main points, the values and beliefs, the difference between the colones and the why some don't get punished for their beliefs all of those are a paragraph. sorry i was down stairs fixing my lunch.

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  24. LilVeroDez13 Group Title
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    Its alright.. thanks!! that makes sense now. So is the intro just a thesis?

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  25. Japs Group Title
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    yup short and simple. :D and then you base yr body off of the three points, in the order they are in the thesis.

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    once you starting doing all your papers like that, i can write an essay in 15-20 min. top because the key words are in the thesis. :D

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  27. LilVeroDez13 Group Title
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    It is short nd simple :) Cool.. i have more essays to do today.

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  28. Japs Group Title
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    yea just follow the thesis that i showed you and use TIBC

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    how old are you and what grade r u in? (:

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  30. LilVeroDez13 Group Title
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    15.. 16 in a few days lol. 10th.. u?

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    14..15 in a couple months. 9th.

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  32. LilVeroDez13 Group Title
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    Cool (: Well, ur much of a better writer than me ;)

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  33. Japs Group Title
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    awwh. thanks. its just because of my Ghetto Black teacher Ms. Saeed. lol she taught me everything i just showed you i didnt no any of it before i met her. I love her so much and she made wrtiing so easy. <3

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    Your welcome :)) Thats awsome!! i wish i had a techer like that. I do online so its harder

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    i use to go to public school, but i didnt want to go the high school so now im doing online school its easier but harder at the same time..

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    I used to go to public school too, but onces high school started my parents said i wasnt goin cuz they think theres alot of bad influence. yeahh it is

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    thats what my mom said.. Wow parents think alike. Lol. and I was bullied alot in grade school so my mom didnt want that to happen in high school.

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    Hahaa lol!!! im sorry about that.

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  39. Japs Group Title
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    its no problem. it happened and ive moved on.

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    Dats good u have a great attitude abou it :))!! if it were me it would b different

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    i no you cant let stuff get to you, because you probably aren't ever going to see the moron who did it and one day when they aren't going to have friends there going to wounder why and realize that they were A** to everyone and bulling people isn't worth it. I don't let it get me down. or bother me.its not worth all the tears i shed.

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    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ON7jNG2HBi0 this song describes all of it.

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    Yeahh it isnt worth ur tears. You seem more grown up them me lol ;) I was bullied by my step-cousin.. i see her once in awhile.. cant stand her. my parents dont know.. so i just keep it to myself.

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    it got to the point where i was scared to go to school, i begged my mom to keep me home. i started not eating lunch, and i would go sit in a bathroom stall for lunch i wouldn't go outside of morning anymore, i walked to school everyday super slow so i could just go straight to class. i went from a straight A student to a student who was making d and f. but I tried to put the smile on so i didn't look like it was bothering me.

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    i stood up to her one day because i was done, and i looked her right in the face and called her a bit%^ and told her to leave me the f@#$$ alone that i wasnt her puppet. and i will never be and thats the day i made a friend.

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    Im gladd u dont let any one bring you down.. grl u have guts!! i woudnt b able to stand up to her. Its an experience that u just learn from.. cuz cant go back in time.

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    im a non racist way, i was terrified to do it because i am some skinny white girl who doesn't no how to fight and im skin nd bone and short and this girl is black, and she has gotten into fights all year, and she scared mee.. But i was done i couldn't take the fact that i didn't have any friends for almost the whole school year and the fact that people were making rumors that i slept with certain guys and im a Who$# and a slu# and everything i mean i couldn't take it i was done being scared of my shadow.

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    Ur strong!!! dont let no one tell u differently. Im short too. People have nothing better to do with there life

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    I no they pick on everyone they think they can.. I wasnt going to let them tear me down. And i didnt.

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    Yeahh they do. well im glad u didnt :))!!

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    thanks, :D do you have a fb?

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  52. LilVeroDez13 Group Title
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    Yeahh no problem. no i dont

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  53. Japs Group Title
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    do you have a phone?

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  54. LilVeroDez13 Group Title
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    Yeahh.. well its not really a phone.. its called pinger.. its like an online phone. i'll send u the # thru message (:

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    Sounds good and i have pinger on my ipod.

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  56. LilVeroDez13 Group Title
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    how should i do the conclusion?

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  57. Japs Group Title
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    you sum what you have done up,into 4 sentences kinda like a sentence from each one that will go good together with the rest and a sentence of what you think, you've learned.

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    thanks!! turned it in already :)

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