i want to make my plot shorter. please help. i will attach

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i want to make my plot shorter. please help. i will attach

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i proofread it a bit for you. but i don't think u can make it shorter.... and u must keep everything in one tense... in this case, present tense... here you go... the parts i fixed are in red :) hope that helps!
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so you are saying it is good enough the way i had it?

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i would use the one where i fixed it since there were a lot of errors and you need to stick to one tense... but what you wrote was good... just use the parts i fixed :)
ok thanks you so much :)
np :) good luck!!

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