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charlotte123

  • 2 years ago

How does my poem look? :)

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  1. charlotte123
    • 2 years ago
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    The Cinnamon Challenge The bottle landed on me Time to do this dare Everything will be alright I thought I put a tablespoon of cinnamon in my mouth without a care Its spicy Its gooey Its stickey Yet chewy It sneaked behind my throat and I began to cough Then some how it climbed into my nose and boy did it burn My eyes began to water and tears began to drop out I quickly swallowed it all up and then my stomach started to turn My friends began to congratulate me And then I started smile But I didn't smile because I won the challenge But because I was glad that the side effects wore off after a while Never will I do this challenge again In my whole entire life Don’t be like me and think once before doing something like this Be smart and think twice

  2. alanli123
    • 2 years ago
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    be more emotional

  3. charlotte123
    • 2 years ago
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    thats as emotional as I can be O_O

  4. kmarie1123
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    i like it its ten times better then i can do lol

  5. charlotte123
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    aww thanks marie ^O^

  6. KonradZuse
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    In my opinion it's good but some lines could be shorter for instance "I put a tablespoon of cinnamon in my mouth without a care"

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