anonymous
  • anonymous
Proof Read my paper please and feel free to edit as much as possible!
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At vero eos et accusamus et iusto odio dignissimos ducimus qui blanditiis praesentium voluptatum deleniti atque corrupti quos dolores et quas molestias excepturi sint occaecati cupiditate non provident, similique sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollitia animi, id est laborum et dolorum fuga. Et harum quidem rerum facilis est et expedita distinctio. Nam libero tempore, cum soluta nobis est eligendi optio cumque nihil impedit quo minus id quod maxime placeat facere possimus, omnis voluptas assumenda est, omnis dolor repellendus. Itaque earum rerum hic tenetur a sapiente delectus, ut aut reiciendis voluptatibus maiores alias consequatur aut perferendis doloribus asperiores repellat.
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anonymous
  • anonymous
please help!
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anonymous
  • anonymous
Its pretty good.! If I had to change anything it would be this sentence, "The problem with his theory is that a person could do whatever they, whenever they want and it’s not certain that it’s good or bad" I'd add a lil change it to something like "The problem with his theory is that a person could do whatever they wanted, whenever they wanted and it’s not certain that it’s good or bad"
anonymous
  • anonymous
thanks

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anonymous
  • anonymous
It's good make sure and watch out for fragments and run ons. And your punctuation like the ; , and :

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