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Proof Read my paper please and feel free to edit as much as possible!

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    please help!

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    Its pretty good.! If I had to change anything it would be this sentence, "The problem with his theory is that a person could do whatever they, whenever they want and it’s not certain that it’s good or bad" I'd add a lil change it to something like "The problem with his theory is that a person could do whatever they wanted, whenever they wanted and it’s not certain that it’s good or bad"

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    thanks

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    It's good make sure and watch out for fragments and run ons. And your punctuation like the ; , and :

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