Red the color of blood we shed somebody call the meds cause with im alive but with out you im dead I'm just the truth be said I'm waiting on you So I can be led you can take it to the head or we can take it to the bed I promise you baby you will always be fed you r ma daily bread you r 1 of a kind and cant be read dont disappear on me or ima have to call the feds lets stick together and maybe have a wed Tbh girl you should be mines tbh you are fine lets take it to ma crib and have a sip of wine on you, i'll spend every dime i'll travel the distance who cares about the climb my motivation is you which stays on ma mind you can probably make the blind see shoot look wat yu did to me Im whipped let the hold world see i dont care, ima let it be I fall for yur type this feeling, feels so rite i need to be careful cause she might bite me and her dont fight our love is just too strong of a might but everything isn't alrite idont want you to get confuse of blow a fuse why is there someone tht always has to lose somebody hand me some boose Cause i already told you i cant stop thinking of you
AWWWWW THIS IS SO CUTEEEEE
thanx Brenna :) You the first one to see it! lol
I love it!!!<333333333 Its good as always♥
Thanx Alxy glaad yu like it!
its really good and cute, but too much rhyming. focus more on meaning and rhyme every other line together or two lines then start a new. :)
lol, ok i just started writting not to long ago by the way
well for a start its pretty good :) keep it up ! i have been writing for about 2 years now.