anonymous
  • anonymous
can some please proofread my essay
English
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anonymous
  • anonymous
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anonymous
  • anonymous
I proof read your essay. You main problem is lack of commas, a couple run-on sentences, and a few miss-used words. I highlighted problems, but it's not that easy to distinguish what it wrong in the highlights so I hope you can find the mistakes from what I've highlighted. Also, I believe that your first sentence needs to be indented. Hope this helps.
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