ta123
Can someone please proofread some of my essay



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I wouldn't mind proofreading. You still there?

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@ta123 ??

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Here the updated version Zordoloom

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Comments clear so far?

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yes

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Alright, well i'll stop there then.

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Or should i continue?

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if you want, but there lot of mistake, so going to take time for me to fix all them

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Well, I'll see how much i can do.

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Thanks!

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Hope you realize how much corrections there are.

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*needed.

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You got good flow, you just need to correct some common mistakes. Look at the attachment.