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ta123

  • 3 years ago

Can someone please proofread some of my essay

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  1. ta123
    • 3 years ago
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  2. geerky42
    • 3 years ago
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    Wrong subject. Go to http://openstudy.com/study#/groups/Writing

  3. zordoloom
    • 3 years ago
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    I wouldn't mind proofreading. You still there?

  4. zordoloom
    • 3 years ago
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    @ta123 ??

  5. ta123
    • 3 years ago
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    Here the updated version Zordoloom

  6. zordoloom
    • 3 years ago
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  7. zordoloom
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    Comments clear so far?

  8. ta123
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    yes

  9. zordoloom
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    Alright, well i'll stop there then.

  10. zordoloom
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    Or should i continue?

  11. ta123
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    if you want, but there lot of mistake, so going to take time for me to fix all them

  12. zordoloom
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    Well, I'll see how much i can do.

  13. ta123
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    Thanks!

  14. zordoloom
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  15. zordoloom
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    Hope you realize how much corrections there are.

  16. zordoloom
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    *needed.

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  18. zordoloom
    • 3 years ago
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    You got good flow, you just need to correct some common mistakes. Look at the attachment.

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