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When you've been gone for a day It feels like you've been gone for a century ohhhhhh I can't think when your not here I can't bare it all alone without you baby I'm only gone for the day I'll be back either way I'm never gonna leave you It will always be us two I don't ever wanna leave you Boy you haven't been around So when you gonna come around Oh, cause I miss you You've got no clue what you do, to me you make me feel like imma queen and your my king lets go to my castle you'll always be my queen I'll always be your king lets make it official here's your ring baby boo its your time just sing! OHHHHHHHHHHH I can't be without u boy Cause without u, I ain't nothing This crown don't mean a thing unless you and I are together
now just gotta sing it.....
this is really awesome, i like it :) lol you deserve lots of medals for this!! good job :D
who came up with this? and i wonder whos gonna sing.. it'll turn out amazing :) :)
(i wrote part of it lol)
the rest of the credit goes to Justin!
oh cool, its great! :) you guys did an amzing job i like it :D
ha thx well if it were not for Elise this song would have never happened.
You both have skills, and this is an awesome song :)
ha thx @Alyx_da_Boss
WOW! I give you 1,000 out of 1,000 <3
This looks amazing so far! Definitely continue and make it longer!
Dam J nice rap parts and nice song Elise!
there was a comment about making it longer, but i thinkt he problem is that you dont have a chorus. your lyrics are awesome, you just need a chorus that is in between each verse. that would make is longer and more interesting. i would suggest a up beat, quick chorus that has like 2 or 3 lines and then one line at the end that you repeat. it is super cute too (; preshh
ok how about this for the chorus then.... You are my oxygen You are my life And without you all this is is a lonely love, a lonely love (lonely love is the name of the song)
Perfect!!! Like exactly what the song needs(:
@evergirl I POSTED A NEW POEM
I DO LOV YOU POEM @JUSTINR