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hereweg0

  • 2 years ago

How's the poem?

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  1. hereweg0
    • 2 years ago
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    Am I alone now? Yes. My world shatters. All seems crushed from the single blow. Everyone gone, no one in sight. Did you just leave me? Yes. Alone, cold, silent. My voice echo as it yells for her. But she’s not coming back… Never again will she. Did she just leave me? Yes. Once again with no crutches shall I walk. Am I still standing? Yes. Having trouble on my feet now. Should I care for her anymore? No, keep walking.

  2. lostintranslations
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    Nice rhetoric and tone. I couldn't find a metaphor though, even if its not your thing... metaphors are nice. Reading other poetry also helps.

  3. lostintranslations
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    what I also mean is dont give away your message! The purpose should be to hide it in your poem so that others decipher it, that makes GOOD poetry.

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