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confuseded

  • 2 years ago

can you revise this topic sentence, remember it is not a thesis. I believe the lunchroom could be improved.

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  1. iheartfood
    • 2 years ago
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    Many things can be improved, such as the lunchroom. The lunchroom could use some improving. I think we need to improve the lunchroom. The lunchroom should be improved, I believe. ***Those are just some I can think of right now... Hope that helps! :) Good luck :)

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    Thank you!

  3. iheartfood
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    ur welcome :)

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