bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
ok how should i start my next chapter
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anonymous
  • anonymous
can you show me what all you have?
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
yea

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anonymous
  • anonymous
That might start you off?
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
ok hold on i think i can add 2 tht
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
should it b shade or shadow?
anonymous
  • anonymous
there the same thing I believe but you can choose its not me book
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
true
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
anonymous
  • anonymous
love it!
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
really?
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
should i end it there and start the next chapter or should i just keep adding 2 it?
anonymous
  • anonymous
Add another chapter
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
kk
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
now this is my problem i want 2 start the next chapter in a different part of the story kind of like going back a few days but i dont know how 2 start it
anonymous
  • anonymous
Say 2 days before the man in the attic. Then you start off where he was 2 days ago
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
ok so should i say something like this hold on ill post the link
anonymous
  • anonymous
k
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
this is how i started it off but i think it sounds bad
anonymous
  • anonymous
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
wait thts wht we had b4
anonymous
  • anonymous
go to chapter 1
anonymous
  • anonymous
wait sry wrong one
anonymous
  • anonymous
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
yea tht sounds a lot better
anonymous
  • anonymous
ok
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
but where would i go from there?
anonymous
  • anonymous
maybe talk about what house they live in what it looks like?
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
ok hold on i started typing already and i think this sounds good
anonymous
  • anonymous
ok
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
anonymous
  • anonymous
yea that's good
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
kk i think im gonna add more 2 it hold on
anonymous
  • anonymous
ok
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
anonymous
  • anonymous
Ill be on tomorrow i gtg
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
kk ttyl
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
updated version
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
@nicolebears
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
@Cpt.Sparz
anonymous
  • anonymous
Gs great. Just fix grammer problems and I saw youre in for a good story there. :d
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
thx so much
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
@katie__michelle this is the updated version
anonymous
  • anonymous
WOW thats great :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
ohh okay hang on let me read it
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
kk tell me if u like it
anonymous
  • anonymous
Yes I love it:)
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
really? thx
anonymous
  • anonymous
your welcome..
anonymous
  • anonymous
"I tried to ask who or what it was, but I couldn’t find my voice. I tried screaming, but nothing came out. All I could do was watch " STRESS, EMPHASIZE these EMOTIONS. make your reader FEEL what you are feeling. My lips were unmovable. nothing came out except for the rapid inhalation of air.. All I could d was watch. ETC
bakonloverk
  • bakonloverk
omg tht is so true thx

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