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can you show me what all you have?
That might start you off?
ok hold on i think i can add 2 tht
should it b shade or shadow?
there the same thing I believe but you can choose its not me book
should i end it there and start the next chapter or should i just keep adding 2 it?
Add another chapter
now this is my problem i want 2 start the next chapter in a different part of the story kind of like going back a few days but i dont know how 2 start it
Say 2 days before the man in the attic. Then you start off where he was 2 days ago
ok so should i say something like this hold on ill post the link
wait thts wht we had b4
go to chapter 1
wait sry wrong one
yea tht sounds a lot better
but where would i go from there?
maybe talk about what house they live in what it looks like?
ok hold on i started typing already and i think this sounds good
yea that's good
kk i think im gonna add more 2 it hold on
Ill be on tomorrow i gtg
Gs great. Just fix grammer problems and I saw youre in for a good story there. :d
thx so much
WOW thats great :)
ohh okay hang on let me read it
kk tell me if u like it
Yes I love it:)
"I tried to ask who or what it was, but I couldn’t find my voice. I tried screaming, but nothing came out. All I could do was watch " STRESS, EMPHASIZE these EMOTIONS. make your reader FEEL what you are feeling. My lips were unmovable. nothing came out except for the rapid inhalation of air.. All I could d was watch. ETC
omg tht is so true thx