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bakonloverk

  • 3 years ago

ok how should i start my next chapter

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  1. Cpt.Sparz
    • 3 years ago
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    can you show me what all you have?

  2. bakonloverk
    • 3 years ago
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    yea

  3. Cpt.Sparz
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  4. Cpt.Sparz
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    That might start you off?

  5. bakonloverk
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    ok hold on i think i can add 2 tht

  6. bakonloverk
    • 3 years ago
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    should it b shade or shadow?

  7. Cpt.Sparz
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    there the same thing I believe but you can choose its not me book

  8. bakonloverk
    • 3 years ago
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    true

  9. bakonloverk
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  10. Cpt.Sparz
    • 3 years ago
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    love it!

  11. bakonloverk
    • 3 years ago
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    really?

  12. bakonloverk
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    should i end it there and start the next chapter or should i just keep adding 2 it?

  13. Cpt.Sparz
    • 3 years ago
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    Add another chapter

  14. bakonloverk
    • 3 years ago
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    kk

  15. bakonloverk
    • 3 years ago
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    now this is my problem i want 2 start the next chapter in a different part of the story kind of like going back a few days but i dont know how 2 start it

  16. Cpt.Sparz
    • 3 years ago
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    Say 2 days before the man in the attic. Then you start off where he was 2 days ago

  17. bakonloverk
    • 3 years ago
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    ok so should i say something like this hold on ill post the link

  18. Cpt.Sparz
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    k

  19. bakonloverk
    • 3 years ago
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    this is how i started it off but i think it sounds bad

  20. Cpt.Sparz
    • 3 years ago
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    How about this for the start?

  21. bakonloverk
    • 3 years ago
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    wait thts wht we had b4

  22. Cpt.Sparz
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    go to chapter 1

  23. Cpt.Sparz
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    wait sry wrong one

  24. Cpt.Sparz
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  25. bakonloverk
    • 3 years ago
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    yea tht sounds a lot better

  26. Cpt.Sparz
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    ok

  27. bakonloverk
    • 3 years ago
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    but where would i go from there?

  28. Cpt.Sparz
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    maybe talk about what house they live in what it looks like?

  29. bakonloverk
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    ok hold on i started typing already and i think this sounds good

  30. Cpt.Sparz
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    ok

  31. bakonloverk
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  32. Cpt.Sparz
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    yea that's good

  33. bakonloverk
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    kk i think im gonna add more 2 it hold on

  34. Cpt.Sparz
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    ok

  35. bakonloverk
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  36. Cpt.Sparz
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    Ill be on tomorrow i gtg

  37. bakonloverk
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    kk ttyl

  38. bakonloverk
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    updated version

  39. bakonloverk
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    @nicolebears

  40. bakonloverk
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    @Cpt.Sparz

  41. alwaysdancing18
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    Gs great. Just fix grammer problems and I saw youre in for a good story there. :d

  42. bakonloverk
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    thx so much

  43. bakonloverk
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    @katie__michelle this is the updated version

  44. katie__michelle
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    WOW thats great :)

  45. katie__michelle
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    ohh okay hang on let me read it

  46. bakonloverk
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    kk tell me if u like it

  47. katie__michelle
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    Yes I love it:)

  48. bakonloverk
    • 3 years ago
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    really? thx

  49. katie__michelle
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    your welcome..

  50. lostintranslations
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    "I tried to ask who or what it was, but I couldn’t find my voice. I tried screaming, but nothing came out. All I could do was watch " STRESS, EMPHASIZE these EMOTIONS. make your reader FEEL what you are feeling. My lips were unmovable. nothing came out except for the rapid inhalation of air.. All I could d was watch. ETC

  51. bakonloverk
    • 3 years ago
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    omg tht is so true thx

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