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@AnaheimNena714 would u mind if i sang this??
sure go ahead but u want me to finish it first?
should i comit a crime i aint suicidal im patience with death i show no emotion this is to much stress i don't wana go thru the motions need love i confess wana spread my wings but i got an ankle bracelet im a queen i need a king i am lil impatient but i hold the pain in all i need is a lil comfortin -Joanna Ramirez ok im done sorry so long hope u like:/
I LOVE IT OMG this is gonna be an awesome song
really i would love to hear it
i will have it 4 u tomorrow
ok then thank u ive been wanting to make these to songs but i don't know how to find the right tune or note
don't worry i got all under control HAHAH
thank u :)
any body else plz comment i need to know if i shall continue:/
I love writing sad poems. It's a nice way to get a release. You did a great job. That was an amazing poem. I loved it. Bravo.
You did a GREAT job! You've got talent..
i love it:)
Amazing.... :') I feel that way sometimes too. But I don't think of suicide... I'm just gonna die and see God, then what is he going to think of what I've just done? Live! :) Fake it till you make it! You can push through this HARD live... God Loves u! :D
yea i get yo uno i cant imagine myself comiting suicide
:) Good! :D Your life is precious. You have a purpose. :D
yea i no im not sucidal i let my time come
:P Good! :D
thats really good
This is really awesome!!!
thank you i hoping to turn these poems to music one day
*New poem *I'm just writing *This this is so stressing I cant help but cry this life is *too depressing I just *wanna leave and say bye I feel under house arrest writing this isn't making it better I swear *I'm trying my best *If I go i promise *I'll write a letter *I don't know if this is *Gods test *I feel lonely and *forgotten *there's things *I *wanna get off my chest *I'm so heart broken *Cops were here this afternoon *Just turn me in please *I'd rather be in jail until *June *My *choice *you (can)* disagree *I never think *(of) suicide *I want *God to take me when *It's my time *Will it be suicide or homicide *(?) You should probably complete your English classes before attempting something extra-curricular.
i write how i want to i dont need anybody correcting my writing..i write how i want to many artist write how they want to and i can do it to alight i dont need ur opinion
Don't you post things to get opinions?
yes but not your opinion alight....i dont need corrections from you alight i got people to help me with corrections..let me tell you this music is my getaway it relaxes me and you just annoyed me
Lol love you too <3
pshh...na if only you new me..u wouldnt even talk to me...my thug life isnt made for your lil low life self i dont care about your opinion and never will i have my homies to support me no matter wat after im outa house arrest im free ill go were ever i want and no one can stop me
If you didn't care you wouldn't keep arguing ;D
im not if i was arguing i would be saying alot of mean stuff and well im not if you think wat im saying is mean then ull hate when im mad...i aint up for ur lil Yolo life style i live till the day i die and i dnt live for myself i live for my family ill risk my life for them
Who cares? Im pretty sure no one asked about your fake thug life, how you escape from the world, if your mad, or who you'd die for xD All she did was correct you because you can't seem to do it yourself and I'm guessing no computer is advanced enough to correct some of those mistakes you made... Or were you just trying to make new words altogether?
Oh and no one cares about your "homies" xD haha
shyt two lowlifes pshhh... na you know wat u tricks arent worth the talking to just roll out with your yolo bullshyt i dont got time for this i got people to care for...and heres the shyt i dont need corrections alright my computer corrects me but this is how i write
You us two "low lifes" aren't on house arrest? ;)
Haha what makes you think you're a thug?
im from South Anaheim ive been in Surenos X3 since i was 11 yrs old i no im a chola n if u dont think so come n ill prove it to u alight. im done with this bull alight peaz
I love you.
i cant say the same 4 u cuz i barely no u sorry
What? You expect me to know what any of that is? Lol
I thought you'd love me too.