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Tear Drops Course Im stuck on the sadness sitting here alone Tear drops from my eyes starting at the phone wishing you'd come back baby where did you go i've had a broken heart but this hurts to the bone I miss the way you smile and I miss the way you care but I guess its good bye to all the times we shared ive got to move on but as the days go past im sitting here wishing it would have had lasted V1 Dame I cant help this look at what i fricken did i cant stop this here we go again my worlds of the tens and it wont spin cause i hope you know girl I want to be again when you come around i get this feeling i cant explain it but suits my breathing n' i contemplate it but i cant contain it but please dont change it if i tell you i say i love you and thats what ill do but girl until then i con-tap my friend thats smiling at you this place exactly where i wanna be n' i dont want to love because I look out the window n' see all the falling n' in the middle stands you n' me n' not knowing the end n' all i'll have is a memory course x2 V2 ill be reminiscence holding on to my feelings cause sometimes i can see her at my side classify me as the one that doesnt feel pain n' thinks im super man because I can stand and say super man does feel pain in his heart because some girl got him really torn apart n' i usually try and cover it up with a smile on my face but then i get home and i always fall apart i guess its not her fault we fell apart and i should have seen our many problems from the start when i see her i wish that one day we will be together because this feeling in me is like nun other this feeling makes me feel like i am in the sky its also the same feeling when im staring in your eyes When im laying in bed and i start to shake its because i remember the times i wake up next to you i miss the times we shared together because they were better than other waken up thinking of your beautiful face always made me feel like i was in the right place but now it honts me knowing that me and you are through because i really miss you but im sorry this relationship takes 2 just remember ill always love you Course
O: YOU GOT MAD SKILLS, YOU GONNA BE FAMOUS ONE DAY!! YOU BETTER REMEMBER ME WHEN YOU ARE ♥
that is a really long song
Wooww!! Good job!!!!(: but yes rly long :P
thts alot to0 much
Lol yeah long because its a finished song lol And @Reppinthe80 I will and thank you hahah
ohh its still good doe
this song is fukin sick homie love it @Nick_P
ooh, i like ;*
OMFG LIKE OMG if this was on youtube i would download it on my Ipod I like it nice job :D
You're gonna be famous lol You got MAD skills :) It's Awesome ;D
i actually had help writing this song with @Bri_Durbin
v1 "dame" ,doyo a word, do you mean "damn"? What exactly did you do wrong? You might as well use the F word instead of 'freakin" because it makes you sound like you're 12. "but suits my breathing' That line doesn't make sense "n' i dont want to love because I look out the window n' see all the falling n' in the middle stands you n' me n' not knowing the end n' all i'll have is a memory" You don't want to love because you looked out the window and saw things falling? Does that really happen? .......
fresh, dope, gud, talent, and yu got skills
"dame" isn't a word8
Beautiful :') I think I'm getting teary eyed
he wrote that because if he spelled it correctly it would have been filtered
Ha thanks and @InsanelyChaotic it makes sense to me and thats what matter but thanks for the criticism
OH I love it!!!!!!!
"its because i remember the times i wake up next to you" "wake" should be "woke"
and yes @evergirl that is exactly why I wrote it like that on paper it uses the F word and yes Damn is slept correctly I think i am aloud to have a typo here and there
ok we get it
its obviously his songg. you dont gotta be a grammar queen about it.
It's constructive criticism and just because it may make sense to you, there are still writing guidelines you should follow
my cousin want to produce u bro
he said when u get older he will get u
calm down guys! good job nonetheless!
And last time i checked rap didnt use correct spelling and punctuation so please stop I dont need you being on my case because you may not like the way i write my songs
i like the way you write em ;*
how am I on your case when I'm giving an opinion that you obviously wanted because I wouldn't have gotten the url to this in my inbox? I'm taking my time to help you make the best out of your song. It's really sad that you can't take constructive criticism that well!
1017 Brick Squad Records.
Maybe you should put a shirt on, man up, and accept what you ASKED for, which were opinions.
No i can take it fine but when you correct my spelling that bugs me i dont think that i will have to spell right when i rap into a mic i kow what i mean and other people like it and just because it doesnt make sense to you obviously it makes sence to other people
Miscommunication, that's all it was ;)
insanely if u dont lik how he wrote go da fuc.k on who cares wat u think its his song not yos
yup but thanks for the advise
He asked for an opinion so yeah, he obviously does care
you guys are so young and hard-headed! yikes!
not you, nick
@InsanelyChaotic stop messing with him he is so damn good and its his body he can do what he wants
Ha @Nick_P The song turned out great I love you! And I am so happy I know you! You are a great guy and keep up the great work! <3
happy bday @Nick_P
Daumn! that was great..