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The rough draft, which I must turn in tomorrow, has to be 45 lines long. The final story has to be 26 lines long.
I have a good story about a gamer who was in bed, feeling suicidal -- but she treated her life like a game, requesting her boyfriend and sister to cooperate. :-)
Uhm, I do not think my teacher will approve of that. Can you modify it a bit somehow?
She said there could be fiction stuff in it ssh as talking animals,etc.
This was when she was developing games, and suddenly got a traumatic attack. Then she lay in bed for 3 months. She didn't want to live; she decided to get rid of herself. Then she designed a game called SuperBetter in which you treat your life like a game, shooting down enemies and winning small missions.
Then replace the woman with a deer and the enemies with carnivores ;-)
Let us work on it and see how it turns out
The gamer sounds better.
Okay, let me set up a google docs so we can collaborate.
And don't get a woman. Seems much more fun when you have a teenager!
That'd work, yes. :-)
I'm here :-D
Yes, I have to stretch long enough to type. :-P
OK. LINK: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gO5cP_0e7r4zi1MZRqZWAwanOT_6cqXnAmbmGUbfBmk/edit
Let s talk in the google docs chat, yes?
Would you like to help, rebecca?
Uhmmmm I'm lost with everyone else's replies lol What are you doing? xD
Ok, so we r making up a story about the importance of determination.
We r editing it on google docs. the link is
We r doing the rough draft, which has to be 45 lines long.
The final draft has to b 26 lines long. Ive to choose the most important things in the rough draft an minimize them to fit on the final draft lined paper/