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help123please

  • one year ago

Please help me make up a story about the importance of determination. The handouts I received are attached.

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  1. help123please
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    @dmezzullo

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    @ParthKohli

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    The rough draft, which I must turn in tomorrow, has to be 45 lines long. The final story has to be 26 lines long.

  5. help123please
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    The story map looks like this

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  6. ParthKohli
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    I have a good story about a gamer who was in bed, feeling suicidal -- but she treated her life like a game, requesting her boyfriend and sister to cooperate. :-)

  7. help123please
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    Uhm, I do not think my teacher will approve of that. Can you modify it a bit somehow?

  8. help123please
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    Good idea,though.:)

  9. help123please
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    She said there could be fiction stuff in it ssh as talking animals,etc.

  10. help123please
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    *such

  11. ParthKohli
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    This was when she was developing games, and suddenly got a traumatic attack. Then she lay in bed for 3 months. She didn't want to live; she decided to get rid of herself. Then she designed a game called SuperBetter in which you treat your life like a game, shooting down enemies and winning small missions.

  12. help123please
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    Hmm. Good!

  13. ParthKohli
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    Then replace the woman with a deer and the enemies with carnivores ;-)

  14. help123please
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    Let us work on it and see how it turns out

  15. help123please
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    No, lol

  16. help123please
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    The gamer sounds better.

  17. help123please
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    Okay, let me set up a google docs so we can collaborate.

  18. help123please
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    Yes?

  19. ParthKohli
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    And don't get a woman. Seems much more fun when you have a teenager!

  20. ParthKohli
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    That'd work, yes. :-)

  21. help123please
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    Yes!!!!

  22. help123please
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    Lol. Brb!

  23. ParthKohli
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    I'm here :-D

  24. help123please
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    One minute,k?

  25. ParthKohli
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    Yes, I have to stretch long enough to type. :-P

  26. help123please
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    OK. LINK: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gO5cP_0e7r4zi1MZRqZWAwanOT_6cqXnAmbmGUbfBmk/edit

  27. help123please
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  28. help123please
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    Let s talk in the google docs chat, yes?

  29. rajathsbhat
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    sure

  30. help123please
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    great.:)

  31. help123please
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    @rebeccaskell94

  32. help123please
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    Would you like to help, rebecca?

  33. rebeccaskell94
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    Uhmmmm I'm lost with everyone else's replies lol What are you doing? xD

  34. help123please
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    Ok, so we r making up a story about the importance of determination.

  35. help123please
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    We r editing it on google docs. the link is

  36. help123please
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    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gO5cP_0e7r4zi1MZRqZWAwanOT_6cqXnAmbmGUbfBmk/edit

  37. help123please
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    We r doing the rough draft, which has to be 45 lines long.

  38. help123please
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    The final draft has to b 26 lines long. Ive to choose the most important things in the rough draft an minimize them to fit on the final draft lined paper/

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    @kayluhhrubio_14

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