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Please help me make up a story about the importance of determination. The handouts I received are attached.

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    The rough draft, which I must turn in tomorrow, has to be 45 lines long. The final story has to be 26 lines long.

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    The story map looks like this

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    I have a good story about a gamer who was in bed, feeling suicidal -- but she treated her life like a game, requesting her boyfriend and sister to cooperate. :-)

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    Uhm, I do not think my teacher will approve of that. Can you modify it a bit somehow?

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    Good idea,though.:)

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    She said there could be fiction stuff in it ssh as talking animals,etc.

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    *such

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    This was when she was developing games, and suddenly got a traumatic attack. Then she lay in bed for 3 months. She didn't want to live; she decided to get rid of herself. Then she designed a game called SuperBetter in which you treat your life like a game, shooting down enemies and winning small missions.

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    Hmm. Good!

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    Then replace the woman with a deer and the enemies with carnivores ;-)

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    Let us work on it and see how it turns out

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    No, lol

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    The gamer sounds better.

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    Okay, let me set up a google docs so we can collaborate.

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    Yes?

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    And don't get a woman. Seems much more fun when you have a teenager!

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    That'd work, yes. :-)

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    Yes!!!!

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    Lol. Brb!

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    I'm here :-D

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    One minute,k?

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    Yes, I have to stretch long enough to type. :-P

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    OK. LINK: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gO5cP_0e7r4zi1MZRqZWAwanOT_6cqXnAmbmGUbfBmk/edit

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    Let s talk in the google docs chat, yes?

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    sure

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    great.:)

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    Would you like to help, rebecca?

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    Uhmmmm I'm lost with everyone else's replies lol What are you doing? xD

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    Ok, so we r making up a story about the importance of determination.

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    We r editing it on google docs. the link is

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    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gO5cP_0e7r4zi1MZRqZWAwanOT_6cqXnAmbmGUbfBmk/edit

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    We r doing the rough draft, which has to be 45 lines long.

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    The final draft has to b 26 lines long. Ive to choose the most important things in the rough draft an minimize them to fit on the final draft lined paper/

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